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The short story The Veld is about Hadley’s family and their Happylife Home and particularly the nursery room, which had cost half again as much as the rest of the house. The theme in this short story is upbringing of children and the relationship between parents and their children. In this story, the author is beginning an important discussion about the way parents are raising their children. The story show very clearly how the parents feel about Peter and Wendy, when the father says ‘’Nothing is too good for our children’’, ‘’ we’ve given the children everything they ever wanted’’ and ‘’we’ve never lifted a hand’’. However, the most important thing is that children are not bound to feel this love towards their parents. I think the problem with this family is that the parents had given their children too much freedom and they come and go when they like. George and Lydia had spoiled their children in this way, they had upraising them. They had not spent the enough time with their children and do not asked them about their life. George and Lydia thought that if they give the children al the freedom they would, that would make them happy. But the true is they had spoiling their children with their indifference with the children life.

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