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HASTE SAG!!! OVERSÆTTELSE--

24. januar 2012 af Hening2 (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

Hej 

Jeg er ikke så god til engelsk så jeg ville håbe i kunne hjælpe mig med at rette min engelsk :)

IKKE BRUG Translate.. så kunne jeg os selv

For at genvinde børn som kunde må McDonald’s laver nogle nye happy meals, som skal fokusere på det sunde, fordi mange forældre ikke ville have deres børn skal spise  fastfood, fordi de bliver tykke og dovne. Så de tag dem i stedet hen til subway og sunset fordi det er mere sundere end mcdonals, derfor har de mistet mange penge på happy meals de seneste år.


De kunne fx skifte pomfritter med ud gulerødder og i stedet for en cola kunne man få vand eller en sund juice og burgeren kunne være mørkt brød i stedet for det hvide, også kunne de lave en legeplads/legerum i restauranten så børn kan lege der indtil de venter på at  får deres mad .

Man kunne også lave sådan noget som hver fredag vil man kunne få halvpris for en happy meal og der var vand og gratis frugt man kunne tag og måske en klovn til at underholder de små børn ,som kunne hedde  ”happy fredag”  så tror jeg nok forældrene nok skal tag alle børnene i familien med på mcdonalds for at spise i stedet for der hjemme.



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In order to regain the children as a customer, McDonald's is doing some new happy meals, which must focus on the healthy, because many parents would not have their children to eat fast food because they are fat and lazy. So they tag them instead to the subway and sunset because it is more healthier than mcdonals, therefore they have lost a lot of money on happy meals in recent years.

You could e.g. switch chips with out carrots and instead of a cola could get water or a healthy juices and burgeren could be the dark bread instead of white, also could you do a playground/sauna in the restaurant so that children can play there until they are waiting to get their food.

We could also do something like every Friday, we could get half-price for a happy meal and there was water and complimentary fruit we could tag and perhaps a clown to entertain small children who could be called "happy Friday" so I think parents will take all the children in the family with at mcdonalds to eat instead of being at home.

Stor hjælp hvis i kunne hjælpe :))))

 


Svar #1
25. januar 2012 af Hening2 (Slettet)

Kom nu hjælp mig lige skal aflever imorgen


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Svar #2
25. januar 2012 af MishKath (Slettet)

Hvad med om du som det første stykke skrev -

In order to regain the children as customers, McDonald's is launching a new type of Happy Meals, that focus more on being healthy because parents don't want their children to eat fast food, because they'll get fat and lazy. Instead, they are taking their children to Subway or Sunset Boulevard because it's healthier than McDonald's. The parents have lost lots of money on Happy Meals the past years.

Et eller andet sted er den aller første sætning rigtig klumpet og alt for lang, med alt for meget handling.
Jeg ville skrive -

McDonald's is launching a new and healthier type of Happy Meal in order to gain the children back as customers. The children's parents' don't want their children eating so much fast food because they'll get fat and lazy.

Det næste stykke -

You could e.g. switch chips/french fries with carrots and cola for water or a healthy juice. The burger could be wholegrain instead of white bread. Also, you could build a playroom inside of the restaurant for the children to play in whilst they wait for their food.

They could put half-price on Happy Meals on Fridays where there's water and fresh food to grab. Maybe there could be a clown to entertain the children. That way, I think the parents will take the children to McDonald's to eat instead of eating at home.

Jeg forstår ikke helt om det er klovnen eller dagen der skal hedde Happy Friday??


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