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Hej Amani
Jeg kiggede din stil meget hurtigt igennem. Jeg har lavet en smule om på nogle af sætningerne, hvilket du nok bør kigge på, fordi det er ikke sikkert, at de siger, det du gerne vil komme frem med. Jeg har ikke lige haft engelsk i ret lang tid, men jeg skulle mene, at det jeg har rettet er mere eller mindre rigtigt : )

- Pas på med alle de kommaer ... jeg har ikke rigtig slettet nogle af dem, fordi jeg ikke lige havde tid til det. Kommaerne i engelsk skal ikke sættes som i dansk : ))

- Det hedder "watched TV" ... ikke "looked TV".

- Det hedder "penfriend" og ikke "penfreind"

A letter

Dear Elena

I hope you are doing well. I am your new penfriend from little Denmark. My name is Amani and I am 13 years old. I saw your advertisement in the paper, and I really liked it. So I decided to be your penfriend, if you want me to. I saw that you love the Beatles, I love the Beatles too!

As you probably know it was New Year a few days ago and since you are from America, I would really like to hear how you celebrate it. Maybe you go to time sqare, who knows?
My New Year celebration is not that special however I am going to tell you about it. First of all I do not always celebrate New Year in Denmark. Sometimes my family and I travel to Sweden and celebrate New Year over there since we have family in Sweden. We did that this year.

I woke up at 12-13 PM because I was really tired. I had been seeing movies all night with all of my nice cousins. I ate ’breakfast’ or rather lunch, haha! Then I made my homework, watched Tv and did normal things on a normal day. At 6 PM I went to the supermarket to buy fireworks with my family. We bought a lot! When we came back ’home’, my aunt and my mother made dinner. They made duck, salad, pasta and baked Moroccan bread (It does taste really good!) At 9 PM we ate dinner, and then we watched Tv and I was just (only?) with my family and had a nice time. At 11 PM we divided our fireworks between us, so we each got some fireworks. We took our clothes on and then went out. Then it was almost midnight. We counted down and at midnight and I mean exactly at midnight we fired the fireworks. After that we were having fun outside, playing and firing some more fireworks, it was very nice. About 1 AM we went inside, relaxing and having a good time. We watched Tv, we heard music and ate cake and candy.
And that was my New Year. I hope I can hear about your New Year too.

Write soon! By the way happy new year!

Yours sincerely Amani

Penneven hedder pen pal , i to ord (og ikke pen friend).

Tak:-D