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HASTER - RETTELSE AF GRAMMAFEJL I ET UDSNIT AF EN STIL!
20. august 2005 af
SHOCKWAVES (Slettet)
Hej, er der en der hurtigst muligt vil rette dette udsnit for sprog- og grammatikfejl? Hvis du/I har nogle bedre formuleringer end jeg har brugt modtages dette også med pleasure:) På forhånd MANGE TAK! Med venlig Shockwaves
Latest I have been reading the autobiography of David Beckham at english and I think it is very important to use english more than only in school.
In my future I think I will use my English because I want a post in the advertising line and New York is the “place” to work. I know that I want to live in New York because the city has always fascinates me, it is the city of possibilities and USA is the country of possibilities – it is just to catch the possibility. I live on the basis of the philosophy that everyone is the architect of his own fortune.
I have choose English at the highest level because I think it is the most important language to learn. Right now I use it in my present life and I know that I will use it in my future and if I become good at English I can get a great post in an international company.
I look forward with pleasure to this year with English on the highest level.
Latest I have been reading the autobiography of David Beckham at english and I think it is very important to use english more than only in school.
In my future I think I will use my English because I want a post in the advertising line and New York is the “place” to work. I know that I want to live in New York because the city has always fascinates me, it is the city of possibilities and USA is the country of possibilities – it is just to catch the possibility. I live on the basis of the philosophy that everyone is the architect of his own fortune.
I have choose English at the highest level because I think it is the most important language to learn. Right now I use it in my present life and I know that I will use it in my future and if I become good at English I can get a great post in an international company.
I look forward with pleasure to this year with English on the highest level.
Svar #1
20. august 2005 af Delija (Slettet)
i anden linje hedder det in english, i andet afsnit 4 linje fascinated hedder det, 3 afsnit 1 linje hedder chosen
Svar #2
20. august 2005 af Marcus (Slettet)
Mit bud.. Rettelserne vil være at finde i parenteserne.
Latest (Recently) I have been reading the autobiography of David Beckham at english (In English) and I think it is very important to use english(English) more than only in school.
In my future I think I will use my English because I want a post in the advertising line and New York is the “place” to work. I know that I want to live in New York, because the city has always fascinates (fascinated) me, it is the city of possibilities and USA is the country of possibilities – it is just to catch the possibility. I live on the basis of the philosophy that everyone is the architect of his own fortune.
I have choose(chosen) English at the highest level because I think it is the most important language to learn. Right now I use it in my present life and I know that I will use it in my future, and if I become good at English I can get a great post in an international company.
I look forward, with pleasure, to this year with English on(at) the highest level.
Latest (Recently) I have been reading the autobiography of David Beckham at english (In English) and I think it is very important to use english(English) more than only in school.
In my future I think I will use my English because I want a post in the advertising line and New York is the “place” to work. I know that I want to live in New York, because the city has always fascinates (fascinated) me, it is the city of possibilities and USA is the country of possibilities – it is just to catch the possibility. I live on the basis of the philosophy that everyone is the architect of his own fortune.
I have choose(chosen) English at the highest level because I think it is the most important language to learn. Right now I use it in my present life and I know that I will use it in my future, and if I become good at English I can get a great post in an international company.
I look forward, with pleasure, to this year with English on(at) the highest level.
Svar #3
20. august 2005 af MHE (Slettet)
Et par tilføjelser til #2's retteælser:
In my (the) future I think I will use [my] English because I want a post (job) in the advertising line (business) and New York is
(")the(") [“]place[”] to work
Right now I use it in my [present life - kommer dog lidt an på, hvad du mener] and I know that I will use it in my (the) future, and if I (will)become good at English I can get a great post (job) in an international company (evt. business).
In my (the) future I think I will use [my] English because I want a post (job) in the advertising line (business) and New York is
(")the(") [“]place[”] to work
Right now I use it in my [present life - kommer dog lidt an på, hvad du mener] and I know that I will use it in my (the) future, and if I (will)become good at English I can get a great post (job) in an international company (evt. business).
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