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Nogen som vil rette Engelsk tak..!

25. august 2005 af Mathias N (Slettet)

En Piige?! :'(
Its been a year daddy i really really miss you
theres a little place called heaven.
we had your favorite dinner tonight.
i ate it all up. even though i dont like carrots
i learned how to swim this summer. i can even open my eyes under water. can you see me? i started kindergarden this year. carry a picture of us in my blues clues lunchbox . you are the best daddy. i can swing by myself! even though i miss you pushing me. can you see me? i miss how you used to tickle me! tickle my belly my belly hurts i try not to cry, mommy said it's okay. i know you dont like it when i cry. you never wanted me to be sad. i try daddy but it hurts maybe someday i can visit you in heaven okay? it's time for me to go to bed now. i sleep with the light on just incase you come home and kiss me goodnight. i love you so much. i miss you Daddy. Nogen som ville rette tak :)

Svar #1
25. august 2005 af Mathias N (Slettet)

Nogen som vil hjælpe tak på forhånd

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Svar #2
25. august 2005 af QaZZaQ

Jeg skal prøve:

It has been a year daddy, I really, really miss you
There's a little place called Heaven.
We had your favorite dinner tonight.
I ate it all up, even though I don't like carrots
I have learned how to swim this summer. I can even open my eyes under water. Can you see me? I've started in kindergarden this year too. I carry a picture of us in my blues clues lunchbox. You are the best daddy. I can swing by myself! Even though I miss you pushing me. Can you see me? I miss how you used to tickle me! Tickle my belly, my belly hurts, I try not to cry, mommy said it's okay. I know you don't like it when i cry. You never wanted me to be sad. I try daddy, but it hurts; maybe someday i can visit you in Heaven okay? It's time for me to go to bed now. I sleep with the lights on just in case you come home and kiss me goodnight. I love you so much. I miss you Daddy.

Sådan ville jeg nok skrive det, men det er ingen garanti for at det er fejlfrit.
Mon ikke der er andre der kan rette mig.....

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