Engelsk
Er der nogen som vil rette det her? Og evt har noget at tilføje?
I have chosen this topic, because I think it's interesting and so think I it is a important topic for every one.
ANC was created in 1912 to get vote to black people in south Africa, and fight against apartheid. ANC is also the oldest party in south Africas history.
Apartheid is state racism is can be compared with second world war, where it was judges there was exposed for racism. In six teen to nineteens was ANC forbidden by the white minority government.
Then ANC was forbidden in 1960, started they a other group called Umkhonto we Sizwe on english nation's spear, they did the same things as ANC, sabotage actions and fight against apartheid.
In 1964 was a lot of the leaders caught and they got life imprisonment, one of them was Mandela.
In 1976 killed the police 600 young demonstrators, it result in more and more joined the party, to fight for there rights and country.
Nineties was ten good years for ANC and Nelson Mandela, first came Mandela out of jail because the minority government economics and political problems was so big that they was have to release him. After that was ANC not forbidden any more, but they should do something return, stop the Guerilla fight. Four years after Mandela came out of jail became he the first black president, he and ANC won with 60 percent of the votes, there was some thing special with it, namely black people could also vote.
Today, the ANC's popularity increasingly threatened due to their slow economic and social progress. Which has also led to enormous frustration and background to more crime.
Er der nogen som vil rette det her? Og evt har noget at tilføje?
Svar #1
19. juni 2012 af Tyrael (Slettet)
I want to emphasize the fact that your text is characterized by many mistakes which you can avoid by reading it a second time. At times your text doesn't even make sense.
The grammar:
As regards commas; when in doubt, leave it out!
Remember the difference between the of-genitive and the 's-genitive.
Concord is by far the most important aspect of grammar - there is a difference between subjects in plural and in singularis.
Use capital letters when you refer to nationalities, languages etc.
If you try to correct it yourself, I'll look at it and correct it as well.
I suppose you are going to utilize the text in question at your oral examination in English?
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