Engelsk stil... Igen

A day in my life
I get up at six o'clock and the first thing I do is to give my cat some food and go to the kitchen to eat a good, solid breakfast. After the breakfast I go into my room and open my closet. I don't use much time to find the clothes I want to wear. After that I go into the bathroom to do my hair and brush my teeth. I use about fifteen minutes in the bathroom. After that the clock is around seven o'clock. I pack my bag for school and wait until the clock is half past seven. When it is time to go, I grab my bag and take my bike out of the shack. Then I bike to school. After ten minutes I’m in front of the school. I go in, have my lessons and then I'm back on the bike again. Now I ride my bike home together with my friends. When I come home I’ll do my homework and maybe I'll eat some fruit, vegetables or something else. When I’m finished with my homework I go into the living room to watch some television. After that the clock is nearly six o'clock in the afternoon. My mother makes dinner for us. We sit around the table and talk about my day, my sister's day and my parents' day. When I’m finish with my meal I go into the bathroom and take a shower. Then I go into my room to put on my pajamas. Then I give my cat some food, clean the litter box and then I go into my room to play computer. After playing computer I go to the bathroom to brush my teeth and afterwards I go to bed.
That's a normal day for me.
The end.

Prøvv at bruge andre søtningsindledere end "after that" - eksempelvis afterwards, later, then etc.

Det vil gøre dit engelsk meget mere flydende.

okay mange tak

Jeg tilbyder at rette engelske stile/essays/opgaver, hvadenten du bare ønsker kommentarer til eventuelle rettelser mm., eller hvis den ønskes rettet for stavefejl m.m..

Jeg tilbyder også privatundervisning.
Jeg har boet samt rejst i USA siden 2006, hvilket har gjort at jeg idag skriver samt taler flydende amerikansk.

Du har også mulighed for at komme hjem til mig på Frederiksberg (kbh) så vi kan gennemgå din opgave sammen.
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Hjælp med fritskrevne opgaver/essays:
     1)  Under 1 side = 50 kr
     2)  2-3 sider: 100 kr.
     3)  4-5 sider: 200 kr.
     4)  6-10 sider: 300 kr.
Hjælp med direkte oversættelser til engelsk max en halv sides oversættelse: 100 kr
Årsagen til denne pris skyldes, at dette tager mig længere tid, da der skal fokuseres mere, end end almindelig fritskreven A-4 side, eksempelvis i et essay, hvor det ikke skal være en korrekt oversat formulering fra en dansk sætning.

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Vh,

Cathrine Strynø