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08. september 2012 af julieeh123 (Slettet)

er der nogle der vil rette min stil?

In 2012 it’s time to the 45’Th presidential election and it’s Barack Obama who is a democratic against Mitt Romney who is a Republican. Barack Obama has been President for USA in 4 years, and many people mean that nothing much had happened, but before Obama was president, Bush was president and USA didn’t had a good economy and many people didn’t had a job, so Barack Obama had to make USA a better place to be, for the American people. From 2008-2012, 4 millions people got a job.

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Barack Obama and Mitt Romney do not agree in a lot of the things that there should happen in USA. Romney means that keeping the American soldiers in Iraq is the best option for minimizing casualties and maintaining a democratic government in Iraq, while Obama had soldiers in Iraq but chose exit in 2009 and troops moved to Afghanistan. </o:p>

When Barack and Romney are talking about immigration Obama tell that he supports a part to legalization for illegal immigrants that includes learning English and paying finds. Romney says that he would make English the official language in USA, and make people stop breaks or other breaks that draw people into the country illegally. </o:p>

Something that USA are not agree with is if abortion should be legal, and that’s why some stats it’s legal while it’s not in some states, but Romney says that states should have laws to allowed abortion. Obama means that abortion should be legal. </o:p>

This time of presidential election is really exciting because many American people is really disappointed because they mean that Obama didn’t do the things he told he would do. Maybe it’s Romney’s time to be USA 45’Th president? </o:p>

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Svar #1
08. september 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)

Fejl er markeret med fede typer.

In 2012 it’s time to the 45’Th presidential election and it’s Barack Obama who is a democratic against Mitt Romney who is a Republican. Barack Obama has been President for USA in 4 years, and many people mean that nothing much had happened, but before Obama was president, Bush was president and USA didn’t had a good economy and many people didn’t had a job, so Barack Obama had to make USA a better place to be, for the American people. From 2008-2012, 4 millions people got a job.

Barack Obama and Mitt Romney do not agree in a lot of the things that there should happen in USA. Romney means that keeping the American soldiers in Iraq is the best option for minimizing casualties and maintaining a democratic government in Iraq, while Obama had soldiers in Iraq but chose exit in 2009 and troops moved to Afghanistan.

When Barack and Romney are talking about immigration Obama tell that he supports a part to legalization for illegal immigrants that includes learning English and paying finds. Romney says that he would make English the official language in USA, and make people stop breaks or other breaks that draw people into the country illegally.

Something that USA are not agree with is if abortion should be legal, and that’s why some stats it’s legal while it’s not in some states, but Romney says that states should have laws to allowed abortion. Obama means that abortion should be legal.

This time of presidential election is really exciting because many American people is really disappointed because they mean that Obama didn’t do the things he told he would do. Maybe it’s Romney’s time to be USA 45’Th president?

Svar #2
08. september 2012 af julieeh123 (Slettet)

tuaind tak jeg vil helt klart rette mine fejl!

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