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Rettelse

24. september 2012 af jennt (Slettet)

Jeg har skrevet en meget lille tekst på engelsk. Den skulle skrives i nutid og jeg er lidt usikker på, om det er helt rigtigt og om der er nogle små fejl. Der vel ikke lige et sprogligt geni, som vil tjekke den igennem :-) (teksten står her under).

 

It was a normal typical day in the village and Mighty was working. But suddenly journalists came over to her and want to talk to Mighty. The journalist asked her, if she had one wish in her life, what that would be. She answered without hesitation, that her biggest wish was to be a pilot.

Then the journalist took her hand and then they were standing in front of a plain. The Journalist gave her the opportunity to live her dream for one day. She climbed into the plain and for the first she had to just take a deep breath. There is a professional pilot who is sitting next to her and helping her. She started the engine and she could feel the rush trough her body and it took her some time before she noticed, that she is flying a plane.

You can just see the joy and happiness in her eyes. She can’t understand that this is really happening to her. She feels so alive. She is so happy, that you can’t describe it and she would never have the ride to stop and it didn’t. The pilot said to her, that they were on their way to USA. Mighty un-derstand nothing and looks totally confused. The journalist wants to give her the amazing opportu-nity to educate as a pilot. Mighty is more conduced now. This must be a dream.

Next day are they finally in USA. Mighty have already checked into a hotel and is now on her way to the pilot-school. There are a lot of different types of people. Men, ladies, young, old and those who look like her. Mighty is in shock. She has never ever seen something like this place. Mighty is now getting a tour of one of those who is working there.

Next day and Mighty has already started at the class. Mighty has always loved school and always been eager to learn. So this is not a problem for her, but she can’t stop thinking about her home. She misses it so much, but she has to focus. One year and she are applying to fly home by her. It takes a lot of hard work, but it’s worth it. So Mighty have to go through a lot of theory and also practical training in flying in one year.

One year later...

Mighty is on her way on the stage. Not for performing, but to confirm that she can now be called a pilot. She has now a fulltime work and has a good home in USA. She visited her home town, every time she has vacation. 

Mighty can’t still understand, that her dream came true and it was when she least expected it.

So your dreams can come true...


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Svar #1
24. september 2012 af MissFrank (Slettet)

Du skifter meget mellem nutid og datid..


Svar #2
24. september 2012 af jennt (Slettet)

Ja, er også det største udfordring for mig i engelsk :-(

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Svar #3
24. september 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)

Nååh, ja -det er da klart som blæk.


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