Hjælp med rettelse af engelskstykke

Hej!

Jeg har brug for hjælp til rettelse af nedenstående engelsk stykke. Jeg ville sætte pris på hvis nogle gad hjælpe mig :-) 

The dazzlingly beautiful lights from the boundless high skyscrapers made her feel alive, but yet unbearable unimportant. Again she sat alone in a cab, on the way to another hotel in another foreign big city.

“Bangkok…I’ve never seen you look this bright”, she mumbled to herself. A tear drifted down her chin. She opened up her big designer bag, while fumbling for a package of Kleenex, to save her perfect makeup. Her feet were slowly killing her, because of her extremely high shoes, and she felt uncomfortable because of the too tight dress. The different time zone started to affect her, and she grabbed her left wrist desperately trying to calculate what time it was. Midst of the confusion, the taxi stopped in front of the hotel. She got out of the cap, and felt the moist heat against her. She knew the different humidity would make her skin look sweaty and ugly.

She looked up at the incalculable tall building, shook her head wondering what she was doing in this foreign city, and then went inside. She smiled miserable at all the accommodating people, and took the elevator to the 40th floor, standing between strangers she might never see again. The feeling of being the only one covered in awkward loneliness, made her feel sick.