Hjælp til rettelse

Jeg skal skrive følgende sætninger fra direkte til indirekte tale, men jeg er ikke sikker på, om jeg har gjort det korrekt. Er der nogen, som vil hjælpe mig med at rette dem:

1.Jack said, ”My girlfriend went with me to the beach yesterday.”
Jack said that his girlfriend went with him to the beach yesterday.

2.He asked her, “Are you sure you left the keys in the door this morning?”
He asked her if she was sure that she had left her keys in the door in the morning.

3.The fishmonger's sign claimed: “Anything fresher is still swimming!”
The fishmonger's sign claimed that anything fresh would still be swimming.

4.The mother asked her daughter, “Will you clean your room tomorrow?”
The mother asked her daughter if she would clean her room tomorrow.

Jeg skal også have oversat disse sætninger:

1.Også i Danmark sluges Twilight-serien af mange teenagere.
The Twilight series is devoured by many teenagers in Denmark too.

2.Tænk engang, at jeg af alle mennesker skulle møde min nabo i New York!
Imagine that I of all people should run into my neighbor in New York!

3.Til sidst var der ikke flere penge tilbage, og alle blev nødt til at give et ekstra bidrag.
At last, there was no more money left and everyone had to contribute with more.

4.De fineste træmøbler i landet er ved at blive solgt til ejeren af en amerikansk virksomhed.
The finest pieces of furniture of wood in the country was being sold to the owner of an American company.