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In the text “Good girl” the instrumental evil is used, because the girl, who beats Christy, says that Ian´s father put her father in Jail. This expresses Instrumental evil, because the girl knows that she is doing something wrong, and she does it to get something out of it.

As an exaple: in “Son of Satan” the boy knows that he is doing something wrong, but he does it to get something out of it.. 

Adam Lanza and the main Character in Son of Satan have much in common, because they are two bad guys who perform violence. But Christy is a contrast to the other two, because she is exposed to violence.

I think It´s sad that people can behave this way, because bullying and violence is unacceptable.
I was completely upset, when I read the short story “Son of Satan”, because the boys are eleven years old, and they are still children and it´s terrible, that boys in this age are so violent.

It was an eye-opening experience to read the short story “Good girl”, because the story is related to reality. Today many people are postponed to group violence.

It was really disagreeable to read the text” Adam Lanza”, because it made me scared that such things happen in real life. 
The three short stories evoked many horribly feelings in me, because it´s sad that violence has become a part of everyday life. 
I didn´t enjoy reading the texts, because the texts evoked bad feeling inside of me, because it´s sad to see that violence is a part of many people´s life.
I have experienced that one of my friends was bullied, it really hurt to see one of my friends being bullied. I tried to help her by talking to the people who bullied her , but it made no difference , because they didn´t stop bullying her.
When I read the text “Adam Lanza” it made me think about the Killer Anders Breivik, who shot many innocent young people in Utøya.

I am going to be using three texts “Son of Satan”, “Adam Lanza” and “ Good girl.
The main themes of the texts are violence and evilness.
In the text “Good girl” the instrumental evil is used because the girl who beats Christy, says that Ian´s father had put her father in Jail. This expresses Instrumental evil, because the girl knows that she is doing something wrong, and she does it to get something out of it.
The idealistic evil is used because the girls are trying to create good existents by beating her, because she wants to be with a Protestant although she is Catholic.
The three texts are very different in how evil they are, but there also incoorperate similarities: The two short stories “ Son of Satan” and “Good girl” the instrumental evil used because they know that they are doing something wrong, and they do it to get something out of it.
For example in “Son of Satan” the boy knows that he is doing something wrong, but he does it to get something out of it, like when he looks up to his father.
On the other hand the foolish evil used in “Adam Lanza”, because he didn’t think about the consequences behind the shooting episode.
The main Characters in the texts have both similarities and differences.
Adam Lanza and the main Character in Son of Satan have much in common because they are two bad guys who commit violence. But Christy is a contrast to the other two because she is exposed to violence.

I could only correct that for you because it's not good english to be honest. It's all over the place. One does not understand what you are trying to say because much of you write makes no sense. Make sure you did not translate this from danish to english because a lot of the meaning is lost when one translates something he or she wrote into english.

Send me the texts and the objectives if you need my help. Oh and remeber to tell me when the deadline is, so i know when to send it back to you if you decide to use my help.