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kan nogen hjælpe mig at rette min oversættelse ?
31. oktober 2005 af
Eyd (Slettet)
Hej jeg er ikke særlig god til engelsk så kan nogen være så venlig at hjælpe mig at rette ?? det haster lidt
Is your computer safe?
He strikes without any warning, and can use an ordinary portable computer to key a secret computer system, and create chaos in the American communication industry.
The man is Kevin Mitnick an outstanding computer hacker without jolt. He is being put in jail for different abuse of computers, and is now object for a national FBI-man hunting, suspect to have stole software for millions of dollars.
FBI thinks that according to an investigation of New York Times that the 30-year-old Mitnick is hiding some place in Californien, but thanks to his technical expertise has Mitnick been able to poach into his pursuers computer system, and keep himself a technological step ahead.
He started as a teenager when he broke into The North American Luftkommandos? computer a adventure which later should form the scenariet??? for the movie “War games” ?? from 1983. With a group of other young computer genius Mitnick started to infiltrate locale communications net like Los Angeles´ catchments (ella ´s)? computer system. In 1982 he was/got arrested and put in jail for 6 months. In 1988 he was again doomed. His lawyer claimed that he suffered of a chronically hang?? to computers and in the judgment it demand that he skulle?? treatment and mustn’t touch computers.
He disappeared in 1991 after that FBI had searched his home with a court order. He was charged to have infiltrated the telephone company’s?? computers while he worked as a private detective. He isn’t seen since.
“Perhaps he seems like a overweight computer nerd, but when he sits over a keyboard he feels omnipotent” says his caseworker. He shall also have a malice side. After getting a refusal on a job in Security Pacific Bank e.g. he was with difficulty prevented to send out a false press release what in he would establish that the firm had a loss of 2,5 millions dollars. Some of Mitnick´s enemies has establish that their telephones is been changed sow it demands 25 cents every time they lift the receiver.
Is your computer safe?
He strikes without any warning, and can use an ordinary portable computer to key a secret computer system, and create chaos in the American communication industry.
The man is Kevin Mitnick an outstanding computer hacker without jolt. He is being put in jail for different abuse of computers, and is now object for a national FBI-man hunting, suspect to have stole software for millions of dollars.
FBI thinks that according to an investigation of New York Times that the 30-year-old Mitnick is hiding some place in Californien, but thanks to his technical expertise has Mitnick been able to poach into his pursuers computer system, and keep himself a technological step ahead.
He started as a teenager when he broke into The North American Luftkommandos? computer a adventure which later should form the scenariet??? for the movie “War games” ?? from 1983. With a group of other young computer genius Mitnick started to infiltrate locale communications net like Los Angeles´ catchments (ella ´s)? computer system. In 1982 he was/got arrested and put in jail for 6 months. In 1988 he was again doomed. His lawyer claimed that he suffered of a chronically hang?? to computers and in the judgment it demand that he skulle?? treatment and mustn’t touch computers.
He disappeared in 1991 after that FBI had searched his home with a court order. He was charged to have infiltrated the telephone company’s?? computers while he worked as a private detective. He isn’t seen since.
“Perhaps he seems like a overweight computer nerd, but when he sits over a keyboard he feels omnipotent” says his caseworker. He shall also have a malice side. After getting a refusal on a job in Security Pacific Bank e.g. he was with difficulty prevented to send out a false press release what in he would establish that the firm had a loss of 2,5 millions dollars. Some of Mitnick´s enemies has establish that their telephones is been changed sow it demands 25 cents every time they lift the receiver.
Svar #2
31. oktober 2005 af jönsson (Slettet)
Jeg forsøger at rette de åbenlyse fejl, men da den danske tekst ikke er her, kan jeg kun rette i begrænset omfang.
suspect/suspects betyder at jeg retter det første til det sidste. Parentes betyder udelades
Is your computer safe?
He strikes without any warning, and can use an ordinary portable computer to key a secret computer system, and create chaos in the American communication industry. (Fjerne de to kommaer i foregående sætning)
The man is Kevin Mitnick (sæt komma)an outstanding computer hacker without jolt. He is being(is being = er i færd med at blive sat i f., skriv has been put=er blevet sat) put in jail for different abuse of computers,(-komma) and is now object for/of a national FBI-man hunting, suspect/suspected of having stolen (to have stole) software for/worth millions of dollars.
(FBI thinks that) according to an investigation of New York Times /the FBI thinks that the 30-year-old Mitnick is hiding some place in Californien/-nia, but thanks to his technical expertise (has) Mitnick /has been able to poach into his pursuers/pursuers' computer system, and keep himself a technological step ahead.
He started as a teenager when he broke into The North American Luftkommandos? computer +komma a/an adventure which later should form the scenariet???scenario for/of the movie “War games” (??) from 1983. With a group of other young computer genius/geniuses Mitnick started to infiltrate locale/local communications net/nets like Los Angeles´ catchments (ella ´s)?(Her kan jeg ikke rette uden den danske tekst) computer system. In 1982 he was/(got - was er korrekt, mens got er amerikansk) arrested and put in jail for 6 months. In 1988 he was again doomed/convicted(doomed er dømt/fordømt i bibelsk betydning). His lawyer claimed that he suffered/was suffering of a chronically hang??/inclination to computers and in the judgment it demand/demanded that he skulle??/should undergo treatment and mustn’t touch computers.
He disappeared in 1991 after (that)/the FBI had searched his home with a court order. He was charged (to have)/of having infiltrated the telephone company’s??korrekt computers while he worked as a private detective. He isn’t/hasnt been seen since.
“Perhaps he seems like a/an overweight computer nerd, but when he sits over a keyboard he feels omnipotent” says his caseworker. He (shall also)/is also said to have a malice side. After getting a refusal on a job in /the Security Pacific Bank e.g. he was with difficulty prevented (to send)/from sending out out a false press release (what in - Her er noget galt) he would establish that the firm had a loss of 2,5 millions dollars. Some of Mitnick´s enemies has/have establish/ed that their telephones is/hava been changed sow/so it/they demands/demand 25 cents every time they lift the receiver.
Mvh. jönsson
suspect/suspects betyder at jeg retter det første til det sidste. Parentes betyder udelades
Is your computer safe?
He strikes without any warning, and can use an ordinary portable computer to key a secret computer system, and create chaos in the American communication industry. (Fjerne de to kommaer i foregående sætning)
The man is Kevin Mitnick (sæt komma)an outstanding computer hacker without jolt. He is being(is being = er i færd med at blive sat i f., skriv has been put=er blevet sat) put in jail for different abuse of computers,(-komma) and is now object for/of a national FBI-man hunting, suspect/suspected of having stolen (to have stole) software for/worth millions of dollars.
(FBI thinks that) according to an investigation of New York Times /the FBI thinks that the 30-year-old Mitnick is hiding some place in Californien/-nia, but thanks to his technical expertise (has) Mitnick /has been able to poach into his pursuers/pursuers' computer system, and keep himself a technological step ahead.
He started as a teenager when he broke into The North American Luftkommandos? computer +komma a/an adventure which later should form the scenariet???scenario for/of the movie “War games” (??) from 1983. With a group of other young computer genius/geniuses Mitnick started to infiltrate locale/local communications net/nets like Los Angeles´ catchments (ella ´s)?(Her kan jeg ikke rette uden den danske tekst) computer system. In 1982 he was/(got - was er korrekt, mens got er amerikansk) arrested and put in jail for 6 months. In 1988 he was again doomed/convicted(doomed er dømt/fordømt i bibelsk betydning). His lawyer claimed that he suffered/was suffering of a chronically hang??/inclination to computers and in the judgment it demand/demanded that he skulle??/should undergo treatment and mustn’t touch computers.
He disappeared in 1991 after (that)/the FBI had searched his home with a court order. He was charged (to have)/of having infiltrated the telephone company’s??korrekt computers while he worked as a private detective. He isn’t/hasnt been seen since.
“Perhaps he seems like a/an overweight computer nerd, but when he sits over a keyboard he feels omnipotent” says his caseworker. He (shall also)/is also said to have a malice side. After getting a refusal on a job in /the Security Pacific Bank e.g. he was with difficulty prevented (to send)/from sending out out a false press release (what in - Her er noget galt) he would establish that the firm had a loss of 2,5 millions dollars. Some of Mitnick´s enemies has/have establish/ed that their telephones is/hava been changed sow/so it/they demands/demand 25 cents every time they lift the receiver.
Mvh. jönsson
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