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Hjælp til rettelser
31. oktober 2005 af
Meca (Slettet)
Nogen der vil hjælpe mig med disse sætninger?
Her er min version, men jeg synes ikke det lyder helt rigtigt:
The English government had for a number of years, before the North American colonies secede from England, sent convicts over the Atlantic Ocean. Now they had to find another place to send the prisoners to as the English prisons were soon overloaded.
The choice fell for several reasons on Australia one of the reasons being that it would not be very likely for any of the prisoners to escape from there. In 1786 a fleet on 11 vessels set out…. ?
Og her er den rigtige version:
Før de nordamerikanske kolonier I 1776 løsrev sig fra England, havde de engelske myndigheder I en årrække sendt straffefanger over Atlanten. Nu måtte man finde et andet sted at sende disse fanger hen, da de engelske fængsler hurtigt blev overfyldte.
Valget faldt af forskellige grunde på Australien, bl.a. fordi det ikke var særlig sandsynligt, at det ville lykkes nogen af fangerne at undslippe. I 1786 drog en flåde på 11 skibe af sted mod det næsten ukendte kontinent.
Rigtig mange gange tak for hjælpen
Her er min version, men jeg synes ikke det lyder helt rigtigt:
The English government had for a number of years, before the North American colonies secede from England, sent convicts over the Atlantic Ocean. Now they had to find another place to send the prisoners to as the English prisons were soon overloaded.
The choice fell for several reasons on Australia one of the reasons being that it would not be very likely for any of the prisoners to escape from there. In 1786 a fleet on 11 vessels set out…. ?
Og her er den rigtige version:
Før de nordamerikanske kolonier I 1776 løsrev sig fra England, havde de engelske myndigheder I en årrække sendt straffefanger over Atlanten. Nu måtte man finde et andet sted at sende disse fanger hen, da de engelske fængsler hurtigt blev overfyldte.
Valget faldt af forskellige grunde på Australien, bl.a. fordi det ikke var særlig sandsynligt, at det ville lykkes nogen af fangerne at undslippe. I 1786 drog en flåde på 11 skibe af sted mod det næsten ukendte kontinent.
Rigtig mange gange tak for hjælpen
Svar #1
31. oktober 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)
Der er ikke rigtig nogen grund til at vende så meget rundt på den første sætning:
Before the North American colonies in 1776 seceded from England, the English government had for a number of years shipped convicts across the Atlantic. Now they had to find another place to send the prisoners, since the English prisons were soon overcrowded.
The choice fell for several reasons on Australia one of the reasons being that it would not be very likely for any of the prisoners to escape. In 1786 a fleet of eleven ships set out towards the almost unknown continent.
Before the North American colonies in 1776 seceded from England, the English government had for a number of years shipped convicts across the Atlantic. Now they had to find another place to send the prisoners, since the English prisons were soon overcrowded.
The choice fell for several reasons on Australia one of the reasons being that it would not be very likely for any of the prisoners to escape. In 1786 a fleet of eleven ships set out towards the almost unknown continent.
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