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Der er flere steder hvor du siger noget, der ikke giver 100% mening. I mine øjne liger det du har smidt det hele ind i google translate og så sat det herind, for at få det rigtigt? Korrekt forstået, du skal ihvertfald øve dig på grammatik hvis du har det på A-Niveau, hvis det var mig. Så ville jeg skrive hele opgaven om. For det der får du ikke noget ud af :) Lærerne på STX ser lynhurtigt hvis man snyder :)

Det kan også være det bare er mig der ikke forstår alle dine grammatiske ting. Kan jo godt være du har skrevet det hele selv? Det er bare ikke mit første indtryk ;)

Mvh.

Christian Schou

School bullying is a very serious topic, school bullying is not just in Denmark but you can find it in every country in the world. I think everyone could do something to fight it. Maybe we should make a campaign, the name of the campaign could be “Stop School bullying- Be fair”. Some people commit suicide because of school bullying every day. They do it because they don’t feel those good enough. It isn’t just self-performed injuries, some people who bullies do a lot of things example physical abuse from others, death threats etc.  In my elementary school were there persons who left my class or the school because they felt we bullied them, I saw a guy from my class who was shot a ball in his face, after that episode he left our class, and I understood his reaction.

Back to the topic, I think it’s easy to say “Stop Bullying” but it’s very difficult to stop it. We can’t stop it today or tomorrow. It’s a process who takes a lot of time, maybe a hundreds of years, before we can see some changes. We can link bullying to racism, it’s a thing that always had been and will be here all time. I can give you an example of the most crazy school bullying I know. It was an American girl who took a photo of her body, and she was sent it to a guy from her class/school, the day after, was it at the internet and all her friends was bullying her until she was killed herself. That’s what I think is crazy, you can’t trust anyone in this world, not even a guy from your class, who you are in love with. The meaning of my opinion is: stop school bullying no one thinks it’s fun, it’s not a game it’s the reality.
 

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School bullying is a very serious issue. School bullying is not just in Denmark but it’s a huge problem worldwide. I think everyone could do something to fight it. Maybe we should make a campaign, the name of the campaign could for example be “Stop School bullying- Be fair”.
Some people commit suicide because of school bullying every day. They do it because they don’t feel they are good enough. It isn’t just self-performed injuries. Some people who bullies, do a lot of things for example physical abuse from others, death threats etc.
In my elementary school there were persons who left my class or the school because they felt we bullied them. I saw a guy from my class who was shot a ball in his face. After that episode he left our class, and I understood his reaction.

Back to the topic, I think it’s easy just to say “Stop Bullying” but it’s very difficult to actually stop it. We can’t stop it today or tomorrow. It’s a process that takes a lot of time, maybe a hundreds of years, before we can see some changes. We can link bullying to racism. It’s a thing that always has been here and always will be here. I can give you an example of the most crazy school bullying I know. It was an American girl who took a photo of her body, and she sent it to a guy from her class/school, the day after, it was on the internet and all of her friends were bullying her, until she killed herself. That’s what I think is crazy, you can’t trust anyone in this world, not even a guy from your own class, who you are in love with. What I’m trying to say is: stop school bullying, no one thinks it’s fun, it’s not a game it’s the reality.