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Akut Rettelse!!! English

24. oktober 2013 af ASaad - Niveau: 8. klasse

Hjælp til rettelse!

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Svar #1
24. oktober 2013 af Bonita1234 (Slettet)

Hejsa! :D Jeg rettede ikke alt, da jeg tænkte, du selv skulle finde dine fejl! :D Men 95 % er rettet! :D 

I’ll tell you about my day today. When I write “we”, I mean, Sulaiman, Rasmus, Deniz, Mads O, Mathias and me. We live in the same room.

We woke up late Tuesday, because we played poker and listened to music all night. Today will our class go to Denmark’s most beautiful market town, Svaneke, and go shopping there. But their item was old and expensive, therefore nothing that had any interest in. I enjoyed my soft ice cream the rest of the trip. After we were in Svaneke, we went to Natur Bornholm. We took the bus to the place, this trip was long. Natur Bornholm is essentially about dinosaurs and other animals from before BC. That was a nice experience, because we were in a time machine and saw how the life was then. I ate an ant and it tasted like an orange. After this long trip, we went a long way home. On the way home, we made grimace that was fun. Then we came home and were indoors, have we one thought, party! We light the music up and put some snacks on the table. But we had to eat first, before we really began the party. We got some food and drinks. After dinner we all ought to write notes about the day, because we have to  write an essay, when we came back to school again. Today somebody will entertain us with anything. After the entertainment,  the mini party started. To 10 o’clock was the party over and the poker time has begun. I was dead after the long day so I slept 03 a’ clock.

With love from your lovely


Svar #2
24. oktober 2013 af ASaad

Tusind tak for hjælpen!

Det var en stor hjælp


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Svar #3
25. oktober 2013 af Bonita1234 (Slettet)

Du skal dog selv tage fat i dele af teksten, for der er nogle fejl! :) 

De væsentligste er rettet!

Men selv tak! :D


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