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10. november 2005 af
sebb (Slettet)
Her er min tekst så (håber at i lige gider at kigge på den)
My group existed of 3 persons which were sebastian, Robert and of course my self.
I will first of all like to start to tell that I have worked with Nora in a project earlier in my other subjects, but I have never tried to work with Robert. So when Robert choose to work with the same questions as me, I was a little nervous in the beginning. Because I did not really knew his “style” or (rettere sagt) his way to work.
After 5-10 minutes my fear was disappeared and I found out how sweet and understanding Robert was. And concerning his style to work that was exactly like my own.
The first day, which also was that day we were divided in groups, went fantastic. We sat all 3 down and came with different proposal, while Robert at the same time wrote it down. When the lesson was finished were we also almost finished with our project. The only thing we just (manglede) were just to write it fine in a computer. And that did Robert and sebastian together on a Sunday which they had planed.
You can not really say which of us were the Boss in our group, but I will honestly say that in the end I let my group down a little bit, when I went home to celebrate our “Christmas” that day we should present our project. It was not because of that we had divided it one by one what we should present. But still I think that it was wrong of me just to leave that day.
But all in all I think that our group project was very funny and different, and that it could be fun to try it again.
My group existed of 3 persons which were sebastian, Robert and of course my self.
I will first of all like to start to tell that I have worked with Nora in a project earlier in my other subjects, but I have never tried to work with Robert. So when Robert choose to work with the same questions as me, I was a little nervous in the beginning. Because I did not really knew his “style” or (rettere sagt) his way to work.
After 5-10 minutes my fear was disappeared and I found out how sweet and understanding Robert was. And concerning his style to work that was exactly like my own.
The first day, which also was that day we were divided in groups, went fantastic. We sat all 3 down and came with different proposal, while Robert at the same time wrote it down. When the lesson was finished were we also almost finished with our project. The only thing we just (manglede) were just to write it fine in a computer. And that did Robert and sebastian together on a Sunday which they had planed.
You can not really say which of us were the Boss in our group, but I will honestly say that in the end I let my group down a little bit, when I went home to celebrate our “Christmas” that day we should present our project. It was not because of that we had divided it one by one what we should present. But still I think that it was wrong of me just to leave that day.
But all in all I think that our group project was very funny and different, and that it could be fun to try it again.
Svar #1
10. november 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)
Er det en oversættelse? Hvis det er, så vil den danske tekst hjælpe.
Svar #2
10. november 2005 af sebb (Slettet)
#1: nej det er noget jeg selv har skrevet, så bare ret løs i det;)
Svar #3
10. november 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)
My group (existed)CONSISTED of 3 persons: (which were) Sebastian, Robert and of course (my self)MYSELF.
(I will) first of all, I WOULD like to (start to) tell that I have worked with Nora (in)ON a project earlier in my other subjects, but I have never (tried to work)(SOM DU SKRIVER DET HER, FORSTÅR MAN DET SOM, AT DU IKKE HAR FORSØGT AT ARBEJDE SAMMEN MED HAM) WORKED with Robert. So when Robert (choose)CHOSE to work (with)ON the same questions as me, I was a little nervous in the beginning(.), Because I did not really (knew)KNOW his “style” or (rettere sagt) RATHER his way to work.
After 5-10 minutes my fear (was)HAD disappeared and I found out how sweet and understanding Robert was. (And concerning) his style (to)OF work TURNED OUT TO BE (that was) exactly like my own. (HAR LAVET LIDT OM PÅ DENNE SÆTNING, DA DEN LØD EN SMULE KLODSET)
The first day, which also was (that)THE day we were divided (in)INTO groups, went fantastic. (We)THE 3 OF US sat (all 3) down and came UP with different (proposal)PROPOSALS, while Robert at the same time wrote it down. When the lesson (was)HAD finished (were) we HAD (also) almost (finished)COMPLETED (with) our project. The only thing (we just) LEFT TO DO (manglede) (were)WAS (just) to write it (fine in)ON a computer. (And that did) Robert and sebastian DID THAT together (on a)(GÅR UD FRA AT DET ER EN SPECIFIK SØNDAG I FORBINDELSE MED PROJEKTET OG IKKE BARE EN HVILKEN SOM HELST SØNDAG) Sunday which they had (planed)PLANNED.
You can not really say which of us were the Boss in our group, but I will honestly say that in the end I let my group down a little bit, when I went home to celebrate our “Christmas” (NOGEN SPECIEL GRUND TIL AT SÆTTE CHRISTMAS I GÅSEØJNE?? OG HVORFOR "OUR"? ER DET IKKE ALLES? HVIS DU MENER EN TILSVARENDE HELLIGDAG INDENFOR EN ANDEN RELIGION, SÅ SKULLE DU SKRIVE NAVNET PÅ DEN. HVIS DU IKKE TROR, LÆSEREN VIL FORSTÅ HVAD HELLIGDAGEN ER, SÅ FORKLAR DET MED DET DU NU HAR SKREVET)(that)THE day we (should)WERE TO present our project.
(DEN EFTERFØLGENDE SÆTNING FORSTÅR JEG IKKE.
It was not because of that we had divided it one by one what we should present. (But) still, I think that it was wrong of me (just) to JUST leave that day.
But all in all I think that our group project was very funny and different, and that it could be fun to try it again.
Som du kan se, så er der vist kun en enkelt sætning, jeg ikke helt forstår. Resten er udmærket engelsk, som er forståeligt, så om du vil følge rettelserne er op til dig.
(I will) first of all, I WOULD like to (start to) tell that I have worked with Nora (in)ON a project earlier in my other subjects, but I have never (tried to work)(SOM DU SKRIVER DET HER, FORSTÅR MAN DET SOM, AT DU IKKE HAR FORSØGT AT ARBEJDE SAMMEN MED HAM) WORKED with Robert. So when Robert (choose)CHOSE to work (with)ON the same questions as me, I was a little nervous in the beginning(.), Because I did not really (knew)KNOW his “style” or (rettere sagt) RATHER his way to work.
After 5-10 minutes my fear (was)HAD disappeared and I found out how sweet and understanding Robert was. (And concerning) his style (to)OF work TURNED OUT TO BE (that was) exactly like my own. (HAR LAVET LIDT OM PÅ DENNE SÆTNING, DA DEN LØD EN SMULE KLODSET)
The first day, which also was (that)THE day we were divided (in)INTO groups, went fantastic. (We)THE 3 OF US sat (all 3) down and came UP with different (proposal)PROPOSALS, while Robert at the same time wrote it down. When the lesson (was)HAD finished (were) we HAD (also) almost (finished)COMPLETED (with) our project. The only thing (we just) LEFT TO DO (manglede) (were)WAS (just) to write it (fine in)ON a computer. (And that did) Robert and sebastian DID THAT together (on a)(GÅR UD FRA AT DET ER EN SPECIFIK SØNDAG I FORBINDELSE MED PROJEKTET OG IKKE BARE EN HVILKEN SOM HELST SØNDAG) Sunday which they had (planed)PLANNED.
You can not really say which of us were the Boss in our group, but I will honestly say that in the end I let my group down a little bit, when I went home to celebrate our “Christmas” (NOGEN SPECIEL GRUND TIL AT SÆTTE CHRISTMAS I GÅSEØJNE?? OG HVORFOR "OUR"? ER DET IKKE ALLES? HVIS DU MENER EN TILSVARENDE HELLIGDAG INDENFOR EN ANDEN RELIGION, SÅ SKULLE DU SKRIVE NAVNET PÅ DEN. HVIS DU IKKE TROR, LÆSEREN VIL FORSTÅ HVAD HELLIGDAGEN ER, SÅ FORKLAR DET MED DET DU NU HAR SKREVET)(that)THE day we (should)WERE TO present our project.
(DEN EFTERFØLGENDE SÆTNING FORSTÅR JEG IKKE.
It was not because of that we had divided it one by one what we should present. (But) still, I think that it was wrong of me (just) to JUST leave that day.
But all in all I think that our group project was very funny and different, and that it could be fun to try it again.
Som du kan se, så er der vist kun en enkelt sætning, jeg ikke helt forstår. Resten er udmærket engelsk, som er forståeligt, så om du vil følge rettelserne er op til dig.
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