Engelsk
rettelse
12. november 2005 af
xeana (Slettet)
Derek had a father who was a fireman.
His mother got sick in the end.
Derek`s big sister was a democrat.
He had a little sister that was cute.
Derek had a younger brother called danny.
Danny wanted to be like his brother.
The family was a normally happy family who ended badly.
The problem was that the father die. The boys got into a bad direction in thier life. They became Nazies.
The family moved from a good house to a bad house.
One of those reasons was that his father was already diskriminatet the immigrants.
The other thing was that his father was killed by an immigrant.
(the immigrant took all those thing he wanted and needed e.g.)
He was effected bt the ex-Nazi
His mother got sick in the end.
Derek`s big sister was a democrat.
He had a little sister that was cute.
Derek had a younger brother called danny.
Danny wanted to be like his brother.
The family was a normally happy family who ended badly.
The problem was that the father die. The boys got into a bad direction in thier life. They became Nazies.
The family moved from a good house to a bad house.
One of those reasons was that his father was already diskriminatet the immigrants.
The other thing was that his father was killed by an immigrant.
(the immigrant took all those thing he wanted and needed e.g.)
He was effected bt the ex-Nazi
Svar #2
12. november 2005 af xeana (Slettet)
nej, men rettelse på engelsk.
For jeg svært ved grammatik på englesk.
For jeg svært ved grammatik på englesk.
Svar #3
12. november 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)
Derek had a father who was a fireman.
His mother got sick in the end(I SLUTNINGEN AF HVAD? PRØV AT TILFØJE "OF THE STORY").
Derek`s big sister was a democrat.
He had a little sister (that)WHO was cute.
Derek had a younger brother called Danny.
Danny wanted to be like his brother.
The family was a normal(ly) happy family who ended (ER DE ALLE DØDE, ELLER HVORDAN KAN FAMILIEN VÆRE SLUTTET/ENDT) badly.
The problem was that the father (die)DIED. The boys (got into)WENT IN a bad direction in (thier)THEIR life. They became Nazies.
The family moved from a good house to a bad house.
One of (those)THE reasons was that his father was already (diskriminatet)DISCRIMINATING the immigrants.
The other thing was that his father was killed by an immigrant.
(the immigrant took all those thing he wanted and needed e.g.)
He was effected (JEG TROR DU MENER INFLUENCED I STEDET FOR EFFECTED?)(bt)BY the ex-Nazi
His mother got sick in the end(I SLUTNINGEN AF HVAD? PRØV AT TILFØJE "OF THE STORY").
Derek`s big sister was a democrat.
He had a little sister (that)WHO was cute.
Derek had a younger brother called Danny.
Danny wanted to be like his brother.
The family was a normal(ly) happy family who ended (ER DE ALLE DØDE, ELLER HVORDAN KAN FAMILIEN VÆRE SLUTTET/ENDT) badly.
The problem was that the father (die)DIED. The boys (got into)WENT IN a bad direction in (thier)THEIR life. They became Nazies.
The family moved from a good house to a bad house.
One of (those)THE reasons was that his father was already (diskriminatet)DISCRIMINATING the immigrants.
The other thing was that his father was killed by an immigrant.
(the immigrant took all those thing he wanted and needed e.g.)
He was effected (JEG TROR DU MENER INFLUENCED I STEDET FOR EFFECTED?)(bt)BY the ex-Nazi
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