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20. november 2005 af
Hanniballen (Slettet)
Jeg har skrevet noget, og jeg ville blive glad hvis der var nogen der ville kigge på det, og evt. rette. =)
Cancer is the word, the sickness that everybody fears. It’s the disease, that’s much known all over the world, and the disease that many people can get easily. For instance by smoking, drinking, you can inherit it and so on. There are a lot of different kinds of cancer, and it’s not all that is so easy to cure. In Denmark 2000 there were about 32 thousand cases spread between the women and the men, and that is a hard number to swallow. With the women there were 17000 and the men 15000. As you can see the women’s number is higher than the men’s, and that’s because the number of breast cancer is getting bigger as the years go by. Getting breast cancer is not uncommon anymore, but that doesn’t stop the fear from coming.
Tak på forhånd.
Cancer is the word, the sickness that everybody fears. It’s the disease, that’s much known all over the world, and the disease that many people can get easily. For instance by smoking, drinking, you can inherit it and so on. There are a lot of different kinds of cancer, and it’s not all that is so easy to cure. In Denmark 2000 there were about 32 thousand cases spread between the women and the men, and that is a hard number to swallow. With the women there were 17000 and the men 15000. As you can see the women’s number is higher than the men’s, and that’s because the number of breast cancer is getting bigger as the years go by. Getting breast cancer is not uncommon anymore, but that doesn’t stop the fear from coming.
Tak på forhånd.
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20. november 2005 af jeppetoft (Slettet)
Cancer is the word, the sickness that everybody fears. It’s the disease* that’s well* known all over the world, and the disease that many people easily gets*. For instance by smoking, drinking, you can inherit it and so on. There are many* different kinds of cancer, and it’s not all there* is* easy to cure. In year 2000 in Denmark*, there were about 32000* cases spread between women and men, which* is a huge* number to swallow (talesprog). Women were "leading" with 17000 cases against 15000 to the Danish men* (jeg har valgt at omformulere sætningen, da jeg synes, at den blev lidt kluntet!). The women's number is higher than the men's, due* the number of breast cancer among women* is getting bigger as the years go by. Getting breast cancer is not uncommon anymore, but it doesn't make the fear stop*!
Jeg er lidt usikker på, hvad du mener i den sidste sætning... Anyways, lige en hurtig rettelse, men forhåbentlig bedre end ingen!
Jeg er lidt usikker på, hvad du mener i den sidste sætning... Anyways, lige en hurtig rettelse, men forhåbentlig bedre end ingen!
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