Engelsk
gramatisk rettelse
28. november 2005 af
-susanne- (Slettet)
Dear diary.
I need to write my thoughts down about what there will happen tomorrow.
Finally the day has come: Monday 10th of September, the day were the whole school will be closed in a week and me, the students and the teachers we will all go to Cambridge in England.
The train will go exactly at 9 pm and we shall meet at the platform a half an hour earlier. Afterwards we will drive with the train to Esbjerg, where we will sail to England. When we arrive to England, we will drive with bus to Cambridge.
Every class were asked to take care of some entertainment on the way - and we have found many great songs, which we shall sing.
If the weather is good, we are supposed to hold at a couple of places on the way, before we reach Cambridge were we will be accommodation.
I shall live at a hall of residence with the rest of the class.
In the time of this week, we shall see many different things and we will get a chance to talk to English student.
I lock forward to spend a whole week with my friends but also to be told something about English culture.
I need to write my thoughts down about what there will happen tomorrow.
Finally the day has come: Monday 10th of September, the day were the whole school will be closed in a week and me, the students and the teachers we will all go to Cambridge in England.
The train will go exactly at 9 pm and we shall meet at the platform a half an hour earlier. Afterwards we will drive with the train to Esbjerg, where we will sail to England. When we arrive to England, we will drive with bus to Cambridge.
Every class were asked to take care of some entertainment on the way - and we have found many great songs, which we shall sing.
If the weather is good, we are supposed to hold at a couple of places on the way, before we reach Cambridge were we will be accommodation.
I shall live at a hall of residence with the rest of the class.
In the time of this week, we shall see many different things and we will get a chance to talk to English student.
I lock forward to spend a whole week with my friends but also to be told something about English culture.
Svar #1
28. november 2005 af Dr. MolBio (Slettet)
ordforklaring til det følgende: isf=istedet for
l.1 "there" skal slettes.
l.4 "where". og det er bedre at bytte lidt om på sætningen så ordene "and myself" kommer til at stå bag the teachers og derfor skal "me" i l.4 slettes.Der skal også være komma mellem "students" og "teachers" og ikke noget "and".
l.4 "for" isf "in"
l.5 "we" skal slettes (er underforstået)
l.7 "leave" isf "go". og der skal stå "at exactly".
l.7 "be" isf."meet".
l.8 "a" skal slettes.
l.8 "drive with.." skal erstattes med "take the train.."
l.9 "from where we will sail.."
l.10 "in" isf."to"
l. 10 "in a bus" isf."with bus".
l. 11 "was" isf."were".
l. 11 "take care of" (kan stå "be in charge of"..dette er egt.bedre)
l.14 "stop" isf "hold"
l.15 "where" isf "were" og "accommodated" isf "accomodation".
l.18."during this week" isf."in the time of this week".
l. 19 "students" isf."student".
l.20 "look" isf. "lock". og "spending" isf "spend".
sidste linie er det bedre at skrive "learn something about" isf."told something.."
Nu har jeg godt nok gjort det meget let for dig at gå til, men jeg håber at du selv kan se og forstå rettelserne.
Held og lykke.
l.1 "there" skal slettes.
l.4 "where". og det er bedre at bytte lidt om på sætningen så ordene "and myself" kommer til at stå bag the teachers og derfor skal "me" i l.4 slettes.Der skal også være komma mellem "students" og "teachers" og ikke noget "and".
l.4 "for" isf "in"
l.5 "we" skal slettes (er underforstået)
l.7 "leave" isf "go". og der skal stå "at exactly".
l.7 "be" isf."meet".
l.8 "a" skal slettes.
l.8 "drive with.." skal erstattes med "take the train.."
l.9 "from where we will sail.."
l.10 "in" isf."to"
l. 10 "in a bus" isf."with bus".
l. 11 "was" isf."were".
l. 11 "take care of" (kan stå "be in charge of"..dette er egt.bedre)
l.14 "stop" isf "hold"
l.15 "where" isf "were" og "accommodated" isf "accomodation".
l.18."during this week" isf."in the time of this week".
l. 19 "students" isf."student".
l.20 "look" isf. "lock". og "spending" isf "spend".
sidste linie er det bedre at skrive "learn something about" isf."told something.."
Nu har jeg godt nok gjort det meget let for dig at gå til, men jeg håber at du selv kan se og forstå rettelserne.
Held og lykke.
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