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Our class has hat about drugs, cannabis and alcohol for 2 weeks ago. The three days were very exciting and fascinating.
In my world, many young people are taking drugs - most coke and speed, but many, many young people smoke cannabis. And (endnu flere) drinking alcohol – me, too. I drink it because I like to be drunk – you can have so much fun of it. But I don’t drink often; I have my school and home works to do. In addition, it stops being fun, if you drink it too much!
- Something I never hat taking is drugs or cannabis, and I like it in that way. There are so much people, who are dependent on it. It’s awfully.
But – if some of my friends will smoke cannabis some times, I’m just let it be. There are many things, which is more dangerous and unhealthy things than cannabis. And you can’t actually even call it dangerous. It’s unhealthy! Like cigarettes, fat food, alcohol ect.
Svar #1
02. marts 2006 af line1209 (Slettet)
In my world, many young people are taking drugs ( man kan også sige: are doing drugs, istedet) mostLY coke and speed, but many young people ALSO? Smoke cannabis. (slet and) EVENMORE drink alcohol, INCLUDING MYSELF. I drink (slet it) KOMMA, because I like to be drunk. You can have so much fun, WHEN YOU DRINK. But I DO NOT drink often (kan ikke så godt lide, at du starter sætningen med but) KOMMA BECAUSE I have my school and home work(minus s, da homework altid skrives i ental) to do. In addition, it stops being fun, if you drink too much.
Omformuler sætning: something I have never hat ( HAD) taking drugs or cannabis, and I like it in that way. There are (slet so much) MANY people, who are dependent on it ( hvis du mener, at det er mange der er afhængige af det, skal du istedet skrive: many people are addicted to alcohol. It IS awful (slet ly)
But if some of my friends WANT TO smoke cannabis sometimes (I et ord), I WILL JUST LET THEM DO IT. There are many things, which ARE much more dangerous and unhealthy KOMMA than cannabis. (start ikke en sætning med AND) You actually cannot even call it dangerous. It is unhealthy. Like cigarettes, FAST food, alcohol ETC.
Håber du kan bruge nogle af rettelserne :-)
Svar #2
02. marts 2006 af iinnaj (Slettet)
ville sige dette var sidst i teksten under vurderingen/konklution
Svar #3
02. marts 2006 af Duffy
--> THEOSE three days
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konklution -> konklusion
Svar #4
02. marts 2006 af Zutte (Slettet)
"In my world, many young people are taking drugs"
"are taking" skal være "take" bare.
Jeg går ikke detaljer, men her nogle korte grund: Hvis det er noget, der sker her og nu, bruger man to be + ing-form, men der er også andre regler!
Pointen er bare, at dette er noget, der sker generelt. Det er noget, folk gør af og til, men dog også ofte. Altså, det, han snakker om, er ikke kun EN ting eller noget, som sker nu.
FX: He plays soccer (Her skal man forstå, at han spiller fodbold generelt (fx i en fodboldklub).
FX: He is playing soccer (Her står han og spiller fodbold NU)
Der er mange andre regler for ing-form, men det var lige et lille fingerpeg om, man skal passe på med ing-former. Vi skal også passe på alle de slang og talemåder, som man ser i amerikanske film :)
Svar #5
03. marts 2006 af line1209 (Slettet)
:-)
Svar #7
03. marts 2006 af Zutte (Slettet)
Det er meget muligt, man hører det i amerikanske film eller serier, men pas på, for de snakker langt fra grammatisk korrekt hele tiden, hvis man går lidt i dybden med deres sprog :)
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