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19. marts 2006 af
white_angel (Slettet)
Benjamin havde nu tilbragt ca. 35år i Kenya .Han var snart 60år og var begyndt at se nærmere på sit liv .Han havde ikke tidligere bekymret sig om sådanne filosofiske ,eller snarere eksistentielle spørgsmål .
På mange måder har jeg haft et godt liv .Jeg har ikke været alvorligt syg ,jeg har haft succes i mit arbejde ,og jeg har haft - og har stadig en dejlig kone og et par søde børn og børnebørn .Hvad mon det så er der mangler ? Måske er det gået nemt for mig ? Måske har jeg glemt at leve mit liv?
Hvilke afgørende begivenheder var der sket i hans liv ? hans første barn var blevet født kort tid efter hans forældres død i en trafikulykke .Det var rigtigt .Kort tid efter var han og hans famlie rejst til Afrika -og de var her stadig .
''Jeg skulle måske have taget et sabbatår .Så ville der have været tid til at tænke over tingene,og jeg ville -måske -være blevet et lykkeligere menneske.''
Benjamin had now spend about 35 years in Kenya.He was almost 60 years old and had begun to look closer at his life .He hadn't been worried earlier about the philosophical,or rather the existential questions .
''I have had a good life in many ways.I have not been seriously sick ,I have had succes in my job ,and I have had -and have an wonderful wife and a couple sweet children and grandchildren .I wonder what it is that I miss?Perhaps it has been too easy for me? Perhaps I've forgotten to live my life?''
Which determinded events had happened in his life .His first child had been born shortly after his perents death in a road accident.It was important .Shortly after he and his family travelled to Afrika-and they were stil here.
''I should perhaps have taken a year off.So I could have time to think over the things ,and I would -perhaps - have been a happier person.''
hjælp!!! ,den skal afleveres imorgen .
På mange måder har jeg haft et godt liv .Jeg har ikke været alvorligt syg ,jeg har haft succes i mit arbejde ,og jeg har haft - og har stadig en dejlig kone og et par søde børn og børnebørn .Hvad mon det så er der mangler ? Måske er det gået nemt for mig ? Måske har jeg glemt at leve mit liv?
Hvilke afgørende begivenheder var der sket i hans liv ? hans første barn var blevet født kort tid efter hans forældres død i en trafikulykke .Det var rigtigt .Kort tid efter var han og hans famlie rejst til Afrika -og de var her stadig .
''Jeg skulle måske have taget et sabbatår .Så ville der have været tid til at tænke over tingene,og jeg ville -måske -være blevet et lykkeligere menneske.''
Benjamin had now spend about 35 years in Kenya.He was almost 60 years old and had begun to look closer at his life .He hadn't been worried earlier about the philosophical,or rather the existential questions .
''I have had a good life in many ways.I have not been seriously sick ,I have had succes in my job ,and I have had -and have an wonderful wife and a couple sweet children and grandchildren .I wonder what it is that I miss?Perhaps it has been too easy for me? Perhaps I've forgotten to live my life?''
Which determinded events had happened in his life .His first child had been born shortly after his perents death in a road accident.It was important .Shortly after he and his family travelled to Afrika-and they were stil here.
''I should perhaps have taken a year off.So I could have time to think over the things ,and I would -perhaps - have been a happier person.''
hjælp!!! ,den skal afleveres imorgen .
Svar #2
19. marts 2006 af Irrelevant (Slettet)
Benjamin had now spend about 35 years in Kenya. He was almost 60 years old and had begun to look closer at his life. He hadn't (må I bruge sammentrækningerne, når det er skriftligt? Så vidt jeg ved, må man un det, når det er direkte tale, hvilket det ikke er i dette tilfælde.) been worried earlier about these philosophical, or rather existential questions.
''I have had a good life in many ways. I have not been seriously sick (jeg ville nok bruge "ill", da sick mere er omkring opkast osv :D), I have had succes in my job, and I have had - and have an (bare "a", an skal kun bruges, når det efterfølgende ord starter med en vokal) wonderful wife and a couple of sweet children and grandchildren. I wonder what it is that I miss? Perhaps it has been too easy for me? Perhaps I've forgotten to live my life?''
Which determinded (jeg ville bruge conclusive, determined betyder "bestemt") events had happened in his life? His first child had been born shortly after his parents' death in a road accident. It was important (important betyder vigtig, jeg ville bruge correct). Shortly after he and his family travelled to Afrika - and they were stil here.
''I should perhaps have taken a year off (min ordbog siger, du også kan bruge "a year's sabbatical" eller "a sabbatical year"). Then I would have time to think things through, and I would - perhaps - have been a happier person.''
Det er i hvert fald mit bud :)
''I have had a good life in many ways. I have not been seriously sick (jeg ville nok bruge "ill", da sick mere er omkring opkast osv :D), I have had succes in my job, and I have had - and have an (bare "a", an skal kun bruges, når det efterfølgende ord starter med en vokal) wonderful wife and a couple of sweet children and grandchildren. I wonder what it is that I miss? Perhaps it has been too easy for me? Perhaps I've forgotten to live my life?''
Which determinded (jeg ville bruge conclusive, determined betyder "bestemt") events had happened in his life? His first child had been born shortly after his parents' death in a road accident. It was important (important betyder vigtig, jeg ville bruge correct). Shortly after he and his family travelled to Afrika - and they were stil here.
''I should perhaps have taken a year off (min ordbog siger, du også kan bruge "a year's sabbatical" eller "a sabbatical year"). Then I would have time to think things through, and I would - perhaps - have been a happier person.''
Det er i hvert fald mit bud :)
Svar #3
19. marts 2006 af white_angel (Slettet)
der skal står vigtigt,det er mig der har lavet en fejl der.
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