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How to tell a winner?

Concerning the poem, tells by the difference between a winner and a loser. I think the poem, transforms the loser, to “the bad guy”, who is egoistic, self-centred, and focused on promises to him or herself. The poem tells about, how the loser, because of his/her down trip, becomes irresponsible and critical, to other people, and things, and with that, reject his/her status and honesty further, than it is in advance. The winner, on the other hand, is being mentioned as a “hero”, who in spite of his/her victory, still has energy, and power, to spread out his/her happiness, to other people, and with that, transfer allot of pleasure to people. I think it has something to do with, that the winners always are getting allot of attention, and therefore, will the losers nearly always be isolating, in the winners veil of success. The winner will always try, to improve him/her self, especially now, when he/she knows, that allot of people are behind him/her, and will always fully support him/her in his/her efforts to improve. While the loser doesn’t wants to develop him/her self, and if someone are better than themselves, they will go try make people looks bad, and idiotic. And then is the winner also more social presented, than the loser, understanding in the way, that the winner surely would like to here, and be teaching by others, while the loser, just want to be, as him/her always has been. But why can’t we then just not live, and adjust our brains, after the message : loss and win, with the same mind? I think the reason for this is, that if people just are careless about, if they win or not, there wouldn’t be any point of having a winner and loser. Moreover you will not develop you skill’s, because “why should I develop my self, when the result doesn’t matter”. But at the same time, if you have developed you self to much, you will begin, just to expect that you always will win, and therefore if you loss, you’ll be angry on you self and others, and also loss the feeling for development, when “ why should I develop my self, when I still not are going to win” now will be reality. You can say, that this very negative feeling, the loser is advance, is the way, for the loser, to “survive” his/her inferiority. While the winner, who doesn’t go around with these troubles, like the loser, constant is occupied searching for being better. The question is then, if the winner, because of his/her occupation, will be the “loser”, and the loser, because of his/her survival, will be the “winner”.