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Rettelse summary
05. april 2006 af
homo786 (Slettet)
hvis du har lyst må du gerne se min summery igennem for fejl? Tak på forhånd.
Signs of bad Integration is everywhere, the news shows the “wrong” side of integration. It is always the immigrant and refuges who is blamed. But why is this, the essay by a student Sofie Vestergaard raise the question,
is it our own fault ?
Sofie sees herself as an good individual, she wants to make the quality of life better for others by being self-sacrificing.
She wants a multicultural society where everyone can live side by side, and learn from each others cultures and traditions. She is determined that integration would succeed if both sides make an effort. She knows that the media only focus on showing the negative, instead of showing positives stories about immigrants. But one day a couple of months ago, she doubted herself.
It was a ordinary day she sat in the bus to Thisted , the route of the bus passed the AMU- centre and Sofie had an preview of the multicultural society she wanted to learn, they were talking in the own languages and smiling in the bus while Sofie were trying to understand them. Suddenly
A young boy from Somalia sat beside her an asked her some questions about her name and etc.
Sofie enjoyed the conversations until the boy asked her :
“ Why is it so hard to get friends in Denmark ? ”
She could not give him an answer and their little chitchat ended right there.
Even though they only talked for 5 minutes, Sofie could not understand why she weren’t able to answer him, be his friend. She realised that she did not have time to invest in a new friend. She asked
Herself of the cons and pros for integrating immigrants, and if she were missing out of exciting changes by isolating the boy from Somalia. She realized that it was not only the politicians or the governments responsibility to play a huge role in integration but also good individuals as herself. She wants to make the minorities feel welcome in their new country, not only for them but for her to.
hvis du har lyst må du gerne se min summery igennem for fejl? Tak på forhånd.
Signs of bad Integration is everywhere, the news shows the “wrong” side of integration. It is always the immigrant and refuges who is blamed. But why is this, the essay by a student Sofie Vestergaard raise the question,
is it our own fault ?
Sofie sees herself as an good individual, she wants to make the quality of life better for others by being self-sacrificing.
She wants a multicultural society where everyone can live side by side, and learn from each others cultures and traditions. She is determined that integration would succeed if both sides make an effort. She knows that the media only focus on showing the negative, instead of showing positives stories about immigrants. But one day a couple of months ago, she doubted herself.
It was a ordinary day she sat in the bus to Thisted , the route of the bus passed the AMU- centre and Sofie had an preview of the multicultural society she wanted to learn, they were talking in the own languages and smiling in the bus while Sofie were trying to understand them. Suddenly
A young boy from Somalia sat beside her an asked her some questions about her name and etc.
Sofie enjoyed the conversations until the boy asked her :
“ Why is it so hard to get friends in Denmark ? ”
She could not give him an answer and their little chitchat ended right there.
Even though they only talked for 5 minutes, Sofie could not understand why she weren’t able to answer him, be his friend. She realised that she did not have time to invest in a new friend. She asked
Herself of the cons and pros for integrating immigrants, and if she were missing out of exciting changes by isolating the boy from Somalia. She realized that it was not only the politicians or the governments responsibility to play a huge role in integration but also good individuals as herself. She wants to make the minorities feel welcome in their new country, not only for them but for her to.
Svar #1
05. april 2006 af mig- (Slettet)
Jeh har rettet de fejl jeg kunne få øje på. De er skrevet med stort. Der er ikke så mange fejl.
Signs of bad Integration ARE everywhere, the news shows the “wrong” side of integration. It is always the immigrant and refuges who ARE blamed. But why is this, the essay by a student Sofie Vestergaard RAISES the question,
is it our own fault ?
Sofie sees herself as an good individual, she wants to make the quality of life better for others by being self-sacrificing.
She wants a multicultural society where everyone can live side by side, and learn from each others cultures and traditions. She is determined that integration would succeed if both sides make an effort. She knows that the media only focus on showing the negative, instead of showing positives stories about immigrants. But one day a couple of months ago, she doubted herself.
It was a ordinary day she sat in the bus to Thisted , the route of the bus passed the AMU- centre and Sofie had an preview of the multicultural society she wanted to learn, they were talking in THEIR own languages and smiling in the bus while Sofie were trying to understand them. Suddenly
A young boy from Somalia sat beside her an asked her some questions about her name and etc.
Sofie enjoyed the conversations until the boy asked her :
“ Why is it so hard to get friends in Denmark ? ”
She could not give him an answer and their little chitchat ended right there.
Even though they only talked for 5 minutes, Sofie could not understand why she WASN`T able to answer him, be his friend. She realised that she did not have time to invest in a new friend. She asked
Herself of the cons and pros for integrating immigrants, and if she were missing out of exciting changes by isolating the boy from Somalia. She realized that it was not only the politicians or the governments responsibility to play a huge role in integration but also good individuals as herself. She wants to make the minorities feel welcome in their new country, not only for them but for her to.
Signs of bad Integration ARE everywhere, the news shows the “wrong” side of integration. It is always the immigrant and refuges who ARE blamed. But why is this, the essay by a student Sofie Vestergaard RAISES the question,
is it our own fault ?
Sofie sees herself as an good individual, she wants to make the quality of life better for others by being self-sacrificing.
She wants a multicultural society where everyone can live side by side, and learn from each others cultures and traditions. She is determined that integration would succeed if both sides make an effort. She knows that the media only focus on showing the negative, instead of showing positives stories about immigrants. But one day a couple of months ago, she doubted herself.
It was a ordinary day she sat in the bus to Thisted , the route of the bus passed the AMU- centre and Sofie had an preview of the multicultural society she wanted to learn, they were talking in THEIR own languages and smiling in the bus while Sofie were trying to understand them. Suddenly
A young boy from Somalia sat beside her an asked her some questions about her name and etc.
Sofie enjoyed the conversations until the boy asked her :
“ Why is it so hard to get friends in Denmark ? ”
She could not give him an answer and their little chitchat ended right there.
Even though they only talked for 5 minutes, Sofie could not understand why she WASN`T able to answer him, be his friend. She realised that she did not have time to invest in a new friend. She asked
Herself of the cons and pros for integrating immigrants, and if she were missing out of exciting changes by isolating the boy from Somalia. She realized that it was not only the politicians or the governments responsibility to play a huge role in integration but also good individuals as herself. She wants to make the minorities feel welcome in their new country, not only for them but for her to.
Svar #2
05. april 2006 af homo786 (Slettet)
Tak for hjælpen ;)
men tror der er en del flere fejl plejer altid at have en del når jeg skriver summary.
men tror der er en del flere fejl plejer altid at have en del når jeg skriver summary.
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