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Hjælp Til Rettelse :)

26. april 2006 af Wutz (Slettet)
Hejsa allesammen
Er der nogen der gider at rette denne lille tekst?
Jeg har det ikke på dansk, da det bare er noget jeg har fundet på, o som så skal afleveres.

Most people have some times in their life, thought about suicide in critical lifesituations. It can be chances that decide, if you are gonna kill yourselves. Most teenagers commit suicide because they think it’s the solution to their problems. Several of teenagers haven’t safety at home and the thought of, that they maybe can’t get a job because of the
A person who have trying to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and it is necessary to secure the person in concerned the best help in the situation. The help must take place immediatly after the suicide attempt.

På forhånd tak!:)

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Svar #1
26. april 2006 af annmalene (Slettet)

Nu har jeg lige hurtigt skimtet over den - rettelser står i parantes:

Most people have some times in their life, thought (skal der stå tanker?) about suicide in critical lifesituations. It can be chances (mener du ik ændringer?) that decide(s), if you are gonna kill yourselves. Most teenagers commit suicide because they think it’s the solution to their problems. Several of(of skal ikke med) teenagers haven’t(don't have) safety at home and the thought of, that they maybe can’t get a job because of the (her mangler du da noget)
A person who have trying (tried) to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and it is necessary to secure the person in concerned the best help in the situation - (denne sætning giver ingen mening). The help must take place (meget dårlig engelsk) immediatly (immediately) after the suicide attempt.

Svar #2
26. april 2006 af Wutz (Slettet)

Tak for hjælpen, men du behøver jo ikke ligefrem at rakke mig ned vel.

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Svar #3
26. april 2006 af annmalene (Slettet)

ey, det var da ikke for at rakke ned, det var som en hjælp.. det er dét at dette sted er til for.. ro på :) du spurgte selv om hjælp..

Svar #4
26. april 2006 af Wutz (Slettet)

Ej det ar heller ikke sur ment. Hehe
Mange tak for hjælpen :D

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Svar #5
26. april 2006 af annmalene (Slettet)

så lidt.. smil.

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