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Rettelse?

30. april 2006 af Hanniballen (Slettet)
Nogen der vil rette en engelsk stil?(Grammatisk)
Vil virkelig sætte pris på det.

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Svar #1
30. april 2006 af Hanniballen (Slettet)

Come on?
(Haha, lidt engelsk kan man.)

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Svar #2
30. april 2006 af allan_sim

#0.
Smid teksten ind her - så er der sikkert en eller flere, der gerne vil hjælpe.

Svar #3
30. april 2006 af Hanniballen (Slettet)

Everyday a child is being bullied and every other day at child attempts suicide.
We ask ourselves; “why is that?” without looking at our children, sisters, brothers and so on. Even though most suicides are results of bullying in the schools.
The kids of today aren’t as strong as we think they are. Their self-esteem isn’t going up, but down. We simply care too much about what people says, even though if it is meant as a simply tease.
Teasing isn’t the same as bullying, actually its fare from it. Teasing is mostly between friends, and meant as a joke. Something that’s forgotten the next day, while bullying is something, someone is doing intentionally just to hurt you. It’s a scar on your soul that isn’t that easy to forget.
You’ll always remember those days where you were pushed down in the ground, and stepped on innumerable of times. The name calling, the many hits you had to take.
The memories the victims have can be rather extreme, and maybe have a psychological effect on the individual. Psychological bulling in many ways is far more damaging since it’s difficult to identify, and deal within cases where the use of technology is in the picture, as text messaging and e-mails etc.
There isn’t one reason of bullying, there’s a lot. For instance they can get bullied because of their height, hair, spots, teeth, weight, personality like being quiet or sensitive or their clothes or shoes.
But in fact all of these things are normal, so why bully? Everyone is different and we all have to except that. Nobody is perfect and bullies have lots of things wrong with them too.
Some says it’s because they’re insecure of themselves or hurting or being abused, so they want people to feel the same pain as they do. Others say it’s because they want put another child in distress in some way. Maybe they seek power, and by breaking their “victims”, they’ll get that feeling, that satisfaction. Or some just find it funny to pick on someone who’s different, because they aren’t the target them selves. It’s really hard to say, because people come from different situations, so there isn’t anything you can compare the situations with.
And sad enough, the only thing we can do about this, is to make our children understand that everybody is equal. We have to talk to the children, so they are clear about the definitions of bullying. They have to understand that the one’s who bully aren’t necessarily abnormal or evil. In fact the stereotyped views of victims and bullies are often unhelpful and misleading. The characteristic of bullies is often thought of as unintelligent, bodily large. But in fact bullies can be rather charming, intelligent and highly manipulative; often clever enough to get others to do their duties.

Svar #4
30. april 2006 af Hanniballen (Slettet)

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