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Rettelse af resume.. :)
30. april 2006 af
Pink-Princess (Slettet)
Jeg har skevet et resume og ville høre om der var nogen der ville kigge lidt på grammatikken..:)
The first thing that happens when Arnold come back is that he tells his parents that Eugene is dead. His parents are choked and immediately they go look for Eugene. As soon as the parents have left, Arnold climbs into the loft and hides. He decides to hide forever if no one looks for him. From the loft he can hear cars coming and leaving and voices outside. Then suddenly his farther call for him, Arnold comes down. They go to the sheriff’s office together and Arnold tells the sheriff what had happened. He answers all the questions but unfortunately he can’t explain why he waited so long before he went back to tell his parents. Arnolds farther talks with the sheriff.
At supper Arnolds mother looks away from him. He goes to bed early and he still feels no grief.
He wakes up suddenly while his farther is out. He goes to his parents bedroom door were he tries to contact his mother to tell her how sorry he is. She asks him to go back to bed.
The next morning he won’t tell what he wanted the night before and he is himself scared of his actions.
På forhånd tak..:)
The first thing that happens when Arnold come back is that he tells his parents that Eugene is dead. His parents are choked and immediately they go look for Eugene. As soon as the parents have left, Arnold climbs into the loft and hides. He decides to hide forever if no one looks for him. From the loft he can hear cars coming and leaving and voices outside. Then suddenly his farther call for him, Arnold comes down. They go to the sheriff’s office together and Arnold tells the sheriff what had happened. He answers all the questions but unfortunately he can’t explain why he waited so long before he went back to tell his parents. Arnolds farther talks with the sheriff.
At supper Arnolds mother looks away from him. He goes to bed early and he still feels no grief.
He wakes up suddenly while his farther is out. He goes to his parents bedroom door were he tries to contact his mother to tell her how sorry he is. She asks him to go back to bed.
The next morning he won’t tell what he wanted the night before and he is himself scared of his actions.
På forhånd tak..:)
Svar #1
30. april 2006 af USyay (Slettet)
chocked, and immediately they go to look for Eugene.
Then suddenly his father calls for him, and Arnold comes.
Fy babab: du må ikke trække samme i en aflevering ex. can't(=cannot)
Arnold's father(husk genitiv)
...he goes to bed early, and still he does not feel any greef(undgå at bruge 'no')
His parent's bedroom..
She tells him to go back to bed.
Then suddenly his father calls for him, and Arnold comes.
Fy babab: du må ikke trække samme i en aflevering ex. can't(=cannot)
Arnold's father(husk genitiv)
...he goes to bed early, and still he does not feel any greef(undgå at bruge 'no')
His parent's bedroom..
She tells him to go back to bed.
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