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07. maj 2006 af
Wutz (Slettet)
Hejsa
er der nogen der vil være søde at rette dette? :)
A person who have tried to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and it is necessary to give the person the best help in the situation. The help have to be immediately after the suicide attempt.
Everyday a child is being bullied and every other day at child attempts suicide.
We ask ourselves; “why is that?” without looking at our children, sisters, brothers and so on. Even though most suicides are results of bullying in the schools.
Some says it’s because they’re insecure of themselves or hurting or being abused, so they want people to feel the same pain as they do. Others say it’s because they want put another child in distress in some way.
And sad enough, the only thing we can do about this, is to make our children understand that everybody is equal. We have to talk to the children, so they are clear about the definitions of bullying. They have to understand that the one’s who bully aren’t necessarily abnormal or evil.
er der nogen der vil være søde at rette dette? :)
A person who have tried to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and it is necessary to give the person the best help in the situation. The help have to be immediately after the suicide attempt.
Everyday a child is being bullied and every other day at child attempts suicide.
We ask ourselves; “why is that?” without looking at our children, sisters, brothers and so on. Even though most suicides are results of bullying in the schools.
Some says it’s because they’re insecure of themselves or hurting or being abused, so they want people to feel the same pain as they do. Others say it’s because they want put another child in distress in some way.
And sad enough, the only thing we can do about this, is to make our children understand that everybody is equal. We have to talk to the children, so they are clear about the definitions of bullying. They have to understand that the one’s who bully aren’t necessarily abnormal or evil.
Svar #1
07. maj 2006 af AllstarHo (Slettet)
Yep -
A person who have(has) tried to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and(/which is why) it is necessary to give the person the best help in the situation. The help have(has) to be(begin) immediately after the suicide attempt.
Everyday a child is being bullied and every other day at(a) child attempts suicide.
We ask ourselves; “why is that?” without looking at our children, sisters, brothers and so on(evt vend om og start med without looking..). Even though most suicides are (a) results(result) of bullying in the schools.(,)
Some(some) says(say) it’s because they’re insecure of(about) themselves or(,) hurting or being abused, so they want (other) people to feel the same pain as they do. Others say it’s because they want (to) put another child in distress in some way.
And sad(ly) enough, the only thing we can do about this, is to make our children understand that (evt. we are all) everybody is equal. We have to talk to the children, so (that) they are clear(/ evt. so that they clearly understand the..) about the definitions of bullying. They have to understand that the one’s(ones/people) who bully aren’t necessarily abnormal or evil.
A person who have(has) tried to commit suicide will always be in a difficult situation and(/which is why) it is necessary to give the person the best help in the situation. The help have(has) to be(begin) immediately after the suicide attempt.
Everyday a child is being bullied and every other day at(a) child attempts suicide.
We ask ourselves; “why is that?” without looking at our children, sisters, brothers and so on(evt vend om og start med without looking..). Even though most suicides are (a) results(result) of bullying in the schools.(,)
Some(some) says(say) it’s because they’re insecure of(about) themselves or(,) hurting or being abused, so they want (other) people to feel the same pain as they do. Others say it’s because they want (to) put another child in distress in some way.
And sad(ly) enough, the only thing we can do about this, is to make our children understand that (evt. we are all) everybody is equal. We have to talk to the children, so (that) they are clear(/ evt. so that they clearly understand the..) about the definitions of bullying. They have to understand that the one’s(ones/people) who bully aren’t necessarily abnormal or evil.
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