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10. maj 2006 af
figaro8 (Slettet)
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Remembering the titans
We have read a text and seen a movie, both about the same authentic story, named remembering the titans. It’s about how two normally kind of difference, can find together and fight together. And in this situation, it’s black and white people. The story take it’s place in 1971 in U.S.A, in the state of virgina. A state, which both were known because of it’s great “American football teams”, and the big popular to it, but also known because of the big separating of black and white people, and a big part racism to. Every high schools had a football team, and In a town named Alexandria, they would try integrate an all-black school together with an all-white school. This would mean, that they should make a football team, with both black and white people, the first integrate team. The normal white coach named bill yoast, was put together with a black coach named Herman boone from Carolina. In the beginning, the black and white boys, just couldn’t together. But more and more, as they train, and improve a better knowledge to each other, mixed together with the good sport spirit, they all became good friends, which none of the local people could understand. It ended with, that they became the winners of the season, without loosing any matches. Their team named T.C. Williams, but was more known as the titans. And they were and are a legend for every American football teams today, because they showed, that you no matter skin color can be friends for example through a same interest like football, instead of talking about what you are not united about.
Remembering the titans
We have read a text and seen a movie, both about the same authentic story, named remembering the titans. It’s about how two normally kind of difference, can find together and fight together. And in this situation, it’s black and white people. The story take it’s place in 1971 in U.S.A, in the state of virgina. A state, which both were known because of it’s great “American football teams”, and the big popular to it, but also known because of the big separating of black and white people, and a big part racism to. Every high schools had a football team, and In a town named Alexandria, they would try integrate an all-black school together with an all-white school. This would mean, that they should make a football team, with both black and white people, the first integrate team. The normal white coach named bill yoast, was put together with a black coach named Herman boone from Carolina. In the beginning, the black and white boys, just couldn’t together. But more and more, as they train, and improve a better knowledge to each other, mixed together with the good sport spirit, they all became good friends, which none of the local people could understand. It ended with, that they became the winners of the season, without loosing any matches. Their team named T.C. Williams, but was more known as the titans. And they were and are a legend for every American football teams today, because they showed, that you no matter skin color can be friends for example through a same interest like football, instead of talking about what you are not united about.
Svar #2
10. maj 2006 af Anjavh2 (Slettet)
Jeg ville meget gerne tage et hurtigt kig på det, og det har jeg også gjort... men at rette det er simpelthen alt for kompliceret sådan "bare lige" at gøre (for mig i hvert fald).
Sproget er utroligt "fordansket", og der er problemer med tid og tal. Hvis jeg var dig, ville jeg sætte mig ned og læse teksten op for migselv, - det er muligt at du kan høre de fleste fejl, - om ikke andet så den "fordanskning" der er åbenbar i sproget.
Sproget er utroligt "fordansket", og der er problemer med tid og tal. Hvis jeg var dig, ville jeg sætte mig ned og læse teksten op for migselv, - det er muligt at du kan høre de fleste fejl, - om ikke andet så den "fordanskning" der er åbenbar i sproget.
Svar #3
11. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
Remembering the titans
We have read a text and seen a movie, both about the same authentic story, named remembering the titans. It’s about how two normally kind of difference, can find together and fight together. And in this situation, it’s black and white people. The story takes place in 1971 in U.S.A, in the state of virgina. A state, which both were known because of it’s great “American football teams”, and the big popular to it, but also known because of the big separating of black and white people, and thereby allot of racism to. Every high schools had a football team, and In a town named Alexandria, they would try integrate an all-black school together with an all-white school. This would mean, that they should make a football team, with both black and white people - the first integrate team. The normal white coach named bill yoast, was put together with a black coach named Herman boone from Carolina. In the beginning, the black and white boys, could not figure it out together. But more and more, as they train, and improve a better knowledge to each other, mixed together with the good sport sport atmosphere, they all became good friends, which none of the local people could understand actually. It ends with, that they became winners of the season, without loosing any matches. Their team named T.C. Williams, but was more known as the titans. They were and are a legend for every American football teams today, because they showed, that you no matter skin color can be friends, for example through a sport like football, instead of talking about what you are not united about.
We have read a text and seen a movie, both about the same authentic story, named remembering the titans. It’s about how two normally kind of difference, can find together and fight together. And in this situation, it’s black and white people. The story takes place in 1971 in U.S.A, in the state of virgina. A state, which both were known because of it’s great “American football teams”, and the big popular to it, but also known because of the big separating of black and white people, and thereby allot of racism to. Every high schools had a football team, and In a town named Alexandria, they would try integrate an all-black school together with an all-white school. This would mean, that they should make a football team, with both black and white people - the first integrate team. The normal white coach named bill yoast, was put together with a black coach named Herman boone from Carolina. In the beginning, the black and white boys, could not figure it out together. But more and more, as they train, and improve a better knowledge to each other, mixed together with the good sport sport atmosphere, they all became good friends, which none of the local people could understand actually. It ends with, that they became winners of the season, without loosing any matches. Their team named T.C. Williams, but was more known as the titans. They were and are a legend for every American football teams today, because they showed, that you no matter skin color can be friends, for example through a sport like football, instead of talking about what you are not united about.
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