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kig-lille rettelse?
21. maj 2006 af
figaro8 (Slettet)
nogen der vil tage et kig og rette evt fejl i denne korte tekst?
Martin luther king
And following all this confusion with the segregation and the clear hate and thereby violence to the black people from the white people in America, there had to be done something, as Bob Dylan said. And that was, what happened in the latest 60’s, because here came a revolution lead by the black man, named martin. And he wished to lead black and white people together, hand in hand, in peace, to make the same civilrights for everyone. He was supporter of the non-violence politic, and when he talked to the American people, he made a band between the black and white people, which together killed the injustice segregation Jim crow lows, and thereby made a better and more collective America. He gained to get the Nobel prize, because of his ability to remove the injustice for black people, unfornately he was shoot and killed later. But am sure about that, if he didn’t has shown the world the key how to have connect people, we world still have the same conditions as we had.
Martin luther king
And following all this confusion with the segregation and the clear hate and thereby violence to the black people from the white people in America, there had to be done something, as Bob Dylan said. And that was, what happened in the latest 60’s, because here came a revolution lead by the black man, named martin. And he wished to lead black and white people together, hand in hand, in peace, to make the same civilrights for everyone. He was supporter of the non-violence politic, and when he talked to the American people, he made a band between the black and white people, which together killed the injustice segregation Jim crow lows, and thereby made a better and more collective America. He gained to get the Nobel prize, because of his ability to remove the injustice for black people, unfornately he was shoot and killed later. But am sure about that, if he didn’t has shown the world the key how to have connect people, we world still have the same conditions as we had.
Svar #2
21. maj 2006 af hjskdf (Slettet)
And following all this confusion with the segregation and the clear hate and thereby violence to the black people from the white people in America, there had to be done something, as Bob Dylan said. And that was, what happened in the latest 60’s, because here came a revolution lead by the black man, named martin. And he wished to lead black and white people together, hand in hand, in peace, to make the same civil rights for everyone. He was supporter of the non-violence politic, and when he talked to the American people, he made a band between the black and white people, which together killed the injustice segregation Jim Crow lows, and thereby made a better and more collective America. He gained to get the Nobel Prize, because of his ability to remove the injustice for black people; unfortunately he was shoot and killed later.
(But I am sure about that, if he had not shown the world the ways to have people connected, we world still have the same conditions as we had.)
kunne ikke helt forstå den her sætning, du kunne i stedet for skrive.
I think that we need people like that who could realize that at this time even situation is the same But unfortunately even worse and this time unification is needed not only amongst the people of one nation but across the globe.
(But I am sure about that, if he had not shown the world the ways to have people connected, we world still have the same conditions as we had.)
kunne ikke helt forstå den her sætning, du kunne i stedet for skrive.
I think that we need people like that who could realize that at this time even situation is the same But unfortunately even worse and this time unification is needed not only amongst the people of one nation but across the globe.
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