rettelse/ grammatik ^^

Hej sidder og skriver stil/oplæg. for at sige det rent ud er jeg dårlig til engelsk. Specialt ved grammatik :( fik et 7 tal med hjem i årskarakter. Har en lille stil, håber nogle gider at rette det værste grammatik :).

PS: hvis i kigger på min stil vil jeg gerne stille nogle spørgsmål til stilen/grammatik og håber i vill kigge på det :D Mvh. Denizz


Ralph:
In the beginning of the novel we are introduced to Ralph who is a young boy. He is twelve years old and he is described as being built “like a boxer”.( her vil der komme en tekst fra bogen) ^^
That Ralph represents the all round are basically good person. He has a very strong personality; he has the qualities it takes to be a leader. When a decision is to be made, they vote on it. On the island there are two kinds of leaders. Jack’s way of leading and Ralph’s which are very different from each other. Ralph and piggy feel that it very important the rule of democracy on the island, because they can see that everything is falling apart. The most importantly is that their survival depends on it. At a meeting they decided to make a fire on the mountain, which was Ralph’s idea. He is a fear leader and doesn’t use punishment.

Simon:
Simon is one of the most important and difficult characters in the novel. Simon is younger than other boys. Simon symbolizes natural human and goodness. Simon is very important person to understanding the deeper meanings of the story. Simon is murdered by the other boys, who mistake him for the beast.

Jack:
In the part of the book the fear starts to take over the island. Jack creates his own tribe and two camps have now Ralph and the good side, with Jack and the evil on the other
Jack is a young boy and leader of the choirboys. He is eleven-twelve years old with red hair. I think the red hair symbolizing aggression and danger. As a leader is he very aggressive. He uses fear of the beast and physical threats to control the boys.

Piggy:
Piggy is overweight boy and half blind. He is afflicted with asthma and he tries his best to keep peace on the island. His glasses are important part of the story, when he used it to make the fire. A one night jack and his hunters attack Ralph and Piggy and steal Piggys glasses. The symbolism of Piggy losing his glasses and becoming blind show us that Ralph’s democracy is helpless. He is killed the end of the book. Piggy is murdered by Roger. This is where Golding tells us that democracy is dead on the island. Ralph orders to find Jack. This is symbolic, because the evil are now control them.