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Rettelse.

03. september 2006 af Nørden12345 (Slettet)
Er der en der kan rette evt. fejl i nedenstånde opgave. (kommafejl, stavefejl og grammatiske fejl).

Svar #1
03. september 2006 af Nørden12345 (Slettet)

A portrait of….

(x) is a very studious boy, who always has done his homework. He is every teacher’s dream, as he always works seriously, and always has the answers ready, when he is being attacked by teacher’s questions. Not only teacher’s, but every girl’s dream too. (x) is a very loving and caring boy, who always helps his friends when they need him most. He is a person, who always thinks about the others before himself.
(x) was born the (dato) in (by) . Since then he has never left his birthplace, where he today lives with his parents and a beloved brother, who is only a year younger than himself. Because of being almost the same age, (x) has often been caught in playing with his brother. It is nothing that bothers (x), as he admits that he loves his brother more than anyone else, and they spend a lot of time together. The other reason to the closeness between the two brothers is, that (x)’s parents work a lot and are therefore rarely at home. (x) is from a very well educated family, as his father is sales manager and his mother an accountant.
When (x) is not at school or playing with his brother, he loves to take pictures, and he spends several hours with editing the taken pictures. He is a big fan of the software program Photoshop. At the moment (x) neither has the time or wish to practice any kind of sports, but it is rumoured that (x) has once been a great swimmer. He has been described as becoming something else, when he is under the water. He has also tried go-cart racing in the neighbor city Slagelse, but it wasn’t any kind of success.
(x) hasn’t got one particular best friend, but has got few very close friends, though he admits, that a boy called Michael is closer to him than the others. He came to the class after spending one year at a boarding school, where he got many good friends. Some of them are at the high school too, and when (x) gets some time between lessons, he talks to them. (x) hasn’t yet been able to find some close friends at the high school, but he is optimistic, and he is confident, that he will get some very good friends very soon.
(x)’s favorite dish is pizza. Not a particular kind of pizza, but all kind of pizzas no matter filling. Apart from that, (x) is not a big food lover, and he doesn’t eat his favorite dish that often either. He believes, that good food should be saved for big occasions.
In his spare time (x) reads a lot and listen to the music. He hasn’t got any favorite band or singer, but listens to all kind of music. But still he finds bands like Nirvana and Metallica better than the others, which somehow proves that he likes heavy metal. (x) has got many dreams about how his life should be, but there is one think he is absolutely sure of. He will become an engineer.

Svar #2
03. september 2006 af Nørden12345 (Slettet)

ingen der kan hjælpe??

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