Rettelser?

Jeg har et udsnit fra min stil som jeg er meget usikker på. Er der nogen som kan finde nogle fejl og rette dem?


Jad is supposed to study the difference between Wordsworth and Coleridge. But instead she is dream of a summer job and about her interview to the job.
Jade Beaumont seems to be a very unruffled girl who has her life under control. She has entire life planned and therefore don’t have so many worries about her future. On so many levels she seems almost perfect. She has high standards for her self. For example she thinks that her mother is a bad mother who is higher priority her work than her family.
Jade is living in some kind of dreamland. She has no problem, until she meets one mother with a baby. The woman needed help, but Jade didn’t really want to help. But before she said no she was in her home. But quickly she leaves the mother with her baby. The baby’s problem is that it has a lentil that’s stuck up in her nose.

I feel sorry for Jade being in her dreamland. I see it as a selfish way that she doesn’t want to help anyone except herself. She doesn’t see all the needs that people around her. Instead of telling her mother what she thinks she could do better, she decides to hold her thoughts to herself. So on one hand I think that it’s her own fault that her mother for example haven’t spend more time with her.