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05. september 2006 af Signe-skole (Slettet)
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Prince Happiness


There was upon at time a poor little boy. The little boy called Smallfoot, (he has a very small foot) was living in a poor village called dunkletown.
Smallfoot was a very good boy. Every morning he woke his 3 small sisters up. He made food when they had some food, and at last he helped his ill mother. The mother was very ill, and Smallfoot carried the family instead.

When Smallfoot was twelve years old, the mother died.
The Children were very sad. It was hard to earn money and soon die Smallfoots` youngest sister.
Then Smallfoot decide to send the two last sisters to a rich family in the north of the land.
The sisters cried long time but that was the best Smallfoot could do. Smallfoot found a girl who name was Laura, and they got the best friend.

After a few months the winter was coming. When Smallfoot and Laura got food were it a rare thing, and when it happen was it from the rubbish bin.
Smallfoot was brave and when the winter was over was he a skinny and frozen boy as was lay in a haystack under a metal roof. But he and his friend Laura were a live.

A spring day when he was walking down to the river for drinking some pollution water, he came across a beautiful lady.
“Hello young man,” She said.
“Hello,” answers Smallfoot and smiled.
“Do you have some troubles? I can help you with every thing.”
“Can you do everything?” Smallfoot saw up to the Lady.
“Yes but at one condition. You must never say it’s me as help you.”
“Why not,” asked Smallfoot.
“They haven’t to know I’m so good and help people more than them.”
“Okay,” Smallfoot understood not exactly what the lady means but he said ok.


Smallfoot opened his eyes. He couldn’t remember anything. He saw around and starts up. Wow!!! around Smallfoot was now not the poor old metal roof anymore, but a big, big room with gold, carpets, tables, chairs, big windows, flowers and the sun was shining into the big room. Smallfoot saw the big bed under him and couldn’t understand anything.
Suddenly Smallfoot could remember what was happened yesterday.

He had wished he not was a poor boy, but a boy who lived in a big house and in a rich family. “So I will be happy,” he had said.
“Good morning,” a ladies voice was turning into Smallfoots head.
“Hello lady ehh sorry can I ask you where I am and who you are?”
The lady smiled: “hah Prince Happiness Don’t play smart, breakfast soon, see you.”
The lady closed the door and Smallfoot was alone in the room again.

For the people in the big castle, prince charming had lived long time. Smallfoot was now a prince and the people at the castle could not see what were happened.

After 3 years Smallfoot had nearly forgotten his old life. He didn’t think it was funny to be a prince anymore, he wasn’t happy just rich.
A spring day he was walking in the garden when a little green frog suddenly was sitting in front
of him. ”Hello the frog was saying,” “Hello,” Smallfoot said. “You are looking tired?”
“Yes I’m tired, and I want to get my self back again.” “Get you self back again?” the frog asked.
“Yes for 3 years ago I talked with a wi…. “Suddenly Smallfoot remembered what the witch had said, he couldn’t say who it was.
“I was a poor little boy, and I thought if I got rich I would be happy, but I’m very sad now, because I miss my old friends. Every people here are rich and snoopy and it’s not fun anymore.”
The frog smiled to him. “If you tell me who was doing that I can help you.” Smallfoot smiled and began to tell.

Then the little frog and Smallfoot run away from the castle, they went over mountains, lakes, and forests. After 3 month they found the witch house.

Knock, knock, knock…the door opened. “Hello,” a young witch said. “Hello we are looking after the old witch; she is the only one who can change my friend back.” The frog said.
The young witch said: “Sorry my dear the old lady is dead, and a curse, can just the curse creator lift.” Smallfoot look upset, “ohh no.. “
“But maybe can a wise man in the south of the country help you.” The old lady smiled and the frog said thanks.

The little frog, and Smallfoot walked to the wise man. They were walking, over seas and mountains and at last they came to the wise man.
They told their story, and the wise man was very sorry, but he couldn’t help them. But he knew a beaver in the north of the country and maybe he could help them.

The little frog and Smallfoot had nearly lost the hope. And for every new step Smallfoot got sad.
But after 1 month they went to the beaver. It was a winter day and the water was frozen. “Hello said the beaver, I have expected you.”
“I hope you can help us, we need your help. I want to be my self with my close and my friends. I want to come back to my world and feel the hunger and the happiness instead of the sadness, and instead living in rich world with gold instead of friends.”
“I can se what I can do,” said the beaver. “Drink this.” ………


Everything was turning black. It felt like you felled 500 meters and never landed.
Smallfoot opened his eyes. He looked around and smiled. He closed his eyes again and laughed. Never had he been so happy, so happy for poorness. Beside him was Laura and she gave him a kiss at the cheek. He got his own princess, and his own castle. Because for him was happiness better than warm feeds. Rich people are not always happy people.







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05. september 2006 af Signe-skole (Slettet)

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