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kort, hurtig, oversat?

07. september 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Hej..
En der hurtig lige har lyst til at rette dette?
Skal snart lukker ned for computeren, så det ville være skønt, at der lige var en der rad at rette.
På forhånd tak.

I would like to write about a mental disease. But first of all, what is a mental disease?
It can be based at many diffrent disease, for example: anorexia, bulimia, depression, anxietry/fear, alcohole abuse, drug abuse, psychosis, schizoprenia and lots of oters.
All these disease, is very dangerous for the human being.
The reason could be mental thoughts, dependense or something els.

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Svar #1
07. september 2006 af AllstarHo (Slettet)

I would like to write about a(/SLET) mental disease(MENTAL DISEASES). But first of all, what is a mental disease?
It can be based at many diffrent disease(IT CAN BE A VAREITY OF DIFFERENT CONDITIONS), for example: anorexia, bulimia, depression, anxietry/fear, alcohole(ALCOHOL) abuse, drug abuse, psychosis, schizoprenia and (MANY OTHERS) lots of oters.
All these disease(S), is(ARE) very dangerous for the human being(HUMANS).
The reason could be mental thoughts(') dependense(ELLER RELIANCE)(ON WHAT) or something els(ELSE).

Svar #2
07. september 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Den rettede tekst:

I would like to write about a mental diseases. But first of all, what is a mental disease?
It can be based at many diffrent disease, it can be a vareity of diffrent conditions, for example:
anorexia, bulimia, depression, anxietry/fear, alcohol abuse, drug abuse, psychosis, schizoprenia and many others.
All these diseases, are very dangerous for the humans being.
The reason could be mental thoughts, reliance or something else.

Var det på denne måde?

Svar #3
07. september 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

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Svar #4
09. september 2006 af AllstarHo (Slettet)

Der er nogle fejl jeg har overset og nogle du ikk har fået rettet, så prøver lige igen..(;

I would like to write about a(/SLET A) mental diseases. But first of all, what is a mental disease?
It can be based at(ON) many diffrent(DIFFERENT) disease(S), (AND) it(IT ER OVERFLØDIGT HER) can be a vareity of diffrent(DIFFERENT) conditions, for example:
anorexia, bulimia, depression, anxietry/fear, alcohol abuse, drug abuse, psychosis, schizoprenia and many others.
All these diseases, are very dangerous for the humans being.
The reason could be mental thoughts, reliance (IGEN - RELIANCE ON?) or something else.

Svar #5
09. september 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

jo, tak :-)

Det du har skrevet i (parrantes) skal rettes?

Men jeg forsår ikke helt, hedder det ikke "a metal diseases" ?

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Svar #6
10. september 2006 af AllstarHo (Slettet)

#5 - Jo, det der er skrevet i parentes skal rettes og det med en en skråstreg skal slettes.

Det hedder ikke a mental diseases da a er ental og diseases er flertal. Du kan enten sige mental diseases eller a mental disease. Der hvor jeg har rettet det er fordi jeg synes det lyder bedre ud fra konteksten..

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