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08. september 2006 af
L-Becks-L (Slettet)
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ENGELSK
The movie, Tsotsi from 2005 has had a surprising big success in South Africa. The movie takes place in a slum-quarter? Outside Johannesburg, just like the sort story, Death of a Tsotsi.
The main character got the nick nameTsotsi – he is a gangleder – a cynical and no mercy guy, who almost terrorise the other gangmenbers. They steal and rob in the slum-quarter – and sometimes even get inside with the rich ones. There they must be special “omhyggelige” ?, because these houses is always surrounded by fence with sharp razor and grilles.
One day where he under a break-in has stolen a car, it turns out that an infant is a the backseat in the car. What shall he – who lives in a lousy house, do with an infant ! Sell it? Kill it?
He chooses an other solution – which also is the theme in the movie. His choice changes him – perhaps only temporary, maybe permanent. Men there are hope. That’s properly the reason, that the movie has had that big success in South Africa.
DANSK
Filmen Tsotsi fra 2005 har fået overraskende stor succes I Sydafrika. Den foregår i et slumkvarter uden for Johannesburg, ganske som novellen Death of a Tsotsi.
Hovedpersonen har fået øgenavnet Tsotsi – han er bandeleder – en kynisk og skånselsløs fyr, der nærmest terroriserer de andre medlemmer. De stjæler og røver slumkvarteret – og slipper også undertiden ind hos de rige. Her må de være særligt omhyggelige, da disse huse altid er omgivet af hegn med knivskarpe torne og jerngitre.
En dag hvor han under et indbrud har stjålet en bil, viser det sig er der et spædbarn på bagsædet i denne bil. Hvad skal han – der bor alene i et elendigt hus – stille op med et spædbarn! Sælge det? Slå det ihjel?
Han vælger en anden løsning – og det er også temaet i filmen. Hans valg ændrer ham – måske bare midlertidig, måske permanent. Men der skimtes et håb. Det er vel grunden til, at filmen har fået stor succes i Sydafrika.
ENGELSK
The movie, Tsotsi from 2005 has had a surprising big success in South Africa. The movie takes place in a slum-quarter? Outside Johannesburg, just like the sort story, Death of a Tsotsi.
The main character got the nick nameTsotsi – he is a gangleder – a cynical and no mercy guy, who almost terrorise the other gangmenbers. They steal and rob in the slum-quarter – and sometimes even get inside with the rich ones. There they must be special “omhyggelige” ?, because these houses is always surrounded by fence with sharp razor and grilles.
One day where he under a break-in has stolen a car, it turns out that an infant is a the backseat in the car. What shall he – who lives in a lousy house, do with an infant ! Sell it? Kill it?
He chooses an other solution – which also is the theme in the movie. His choice changes him – perhaps only temporary, maybe permanent. Men there are hope. That’s properly the reason, that the movie has had that big success in South Africa.
DANSK
Filmen Tsotsi fra 2005 har fået overraskende stor succes I Sydafrika. Den foregår i et slumkvarter uden for Johannesburg, ganske som novellen Death of a Tsotsi.
Hovedpersonen har fået øgenavnet Tsotsi – han er bandeleder – en kynisk og skånselsløs fyr, der nærmest terroriserer de andre medlemmer. De stjæler og røver slumkvarteret – og slipper også undertiden ind hos de rige. Her må de være særligt omhyggelige, da disse huse altid er omgivet af hegn med knivskarpe torne og jerngitre.
En dag hvor han under et indbrud har stjålet en bil, viser det sig er der et spædbarn på bagsædet i denne bil. Hvad skal han – der bor alene i et elendigt hus – stille op med et spædbarn! Sælge det? Slå det ihjel?
Han vælger en anden løsning – og det er også temaet i filmen. Hans valg ændrer ham – måske bare midlertidig, måske permanent. Men der skimtes et håb. Det er vel grunden til, at filmen har fået stor succes i Sydafrika.
Svar #1
08. september 2006 af ZiSa7 (Slettet)
Hej, det er de fejl jeg lige fik opsnappet:
The movie, Tsotsi from 2005 has had a surprising big success in South Africa. The movie takes place in a slum (du kan også sige slum district) outside Johannesburg, just like the short story, Death of a Tsotsi.
The main character got the nickname Tsotsi – he is a gang leader – a cynical guy with no mercy (det lyder bedre), who almost terrorise the other gang members. They steal and rob in the slum (district) – and sometimes they even get inside the riches. They must be very careful there, because these houses are always surrounded by fences with sharp razors and grilles.
One day, during a break-in (eller burglary) where he steals a car, he finds a baby on the backseat in the car. What shall he – who lives in a lousy house – do with a baby? Sell it? Kill it?
He chooses another solution – which also is the theme in the movie. His choice changes him – perhaps only temporary, maybe permanent. But there is hope. That’s properly the reason why the movie got that big success in South Africa.
Jeg råder dig til ikke at oversætte direkte fra en dansk tekst til engelsk når du skal skrive stile, for så vil der komme en masse ‘fordanskede’ sætninger og grammatikken forkert. (Jeg ved selvfølgelig ikke med sikkerhed at du har oversat direkte, det ser bare sådan ud…)
PS: Der kan godt være andre fejl.. Skimtede det bare lige hurtig igennem…
The movie, Tsotsi from 2005 has had a surprising big success in South Africa. The movie takes place in a slum (du kan også sige slum district) outside Johannesburg, just like the short story, Death of a Tsotsi.
The main character got the nickname Tsotsi – he is a gang leader – a cynical guy with no mercy (det lyder bedre), who almost terrorise the other gang members. They steal and rob in the slum (district) – and sometimes they even get inside the riches. They must be very careful there, because these houses are always surrounded by fences with sharp razors and grilles.
One day, during a break-in (eller burglary) where he steals a car, he finds a baby on the backseat in the car. What shall he – who lives in a lousy house – do with a baby? Sell it? Kill it?
He chooses another solution – which also is the theme in the movie. His choice changes him – perhaps only temporary, maybe permanent. But there is hope. That’s properly the reason why the movie got that big success in South Africa.
Jeg råder dig til ikke at oversætte direkte fra en dansk tekst til engelsk når du skal skrive stile, for så vil der komme en masse ‘fordanskede’ sætninger og grammatikken forkert. (Jeg ved selvfølgelig ikke med sikkerhed at du har oversat direkte, det ser bare sådan ud…)
PS: Der kan godt være andre fejl.. Skimtede det bare lige hurtig igennem…
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