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Rettelse - Haster

17. september 2006 af anji (Slettet)
Hej er der nogen som vil kigge min oversættelse igennem og evt. rette den for fejl?!
Takker på forhånd


Dansk tekst:

Vi kommer tilbage til vort brev af 1,. September 19- og Deres venlige svar af 5. september og sender vedlagt check på £716,- til fuld udligning af saldoen på vor konto. Vi benytter lejligheden til at takke dem for den forlængede kredit. Vort forsikringsselskab har nu fuldt erstattet den skade, vi led ved branden i vor ekspeditionsafdeling, og afdelingen er i stand til at arbejde normalt igen.
Det interesserede os meget at se og smage prøverne af Deres nye varer Delidan. Vi er overbevist om, at dette produkt kan sælges på det engelske marked, og vi synes, at emballagen er både original og meget tiltalende. Foreløbig vil vi afgive en prøveordre på

12 æsker á 20 stk. Delidan
til en pris á £11 pr. æske
minus sædvanlig rabat, levering omgående.

Har De ladet nyt reklamemateriale fremstille til Delidan?
I bekræftende fald vil vi meget gerne have brochurer og eventuelle udstillingsskilte tilsendt sammen med ordren. Vi vil holde Dem underrettet om vore kunders mening om Delidan.


Min oversættelse:


We revert to our letter of 1 September 19- and your friendly reply of 5 September and we send enclosed cheque for £716, - at full settlement of the balance of our account. We take the opportunity to thank you for the extend credit. Our insurance company compensate us for the damage we loss by fire in our attendance department and the department is able to work normally again.
It interests us very much to see and taste sample of your new goods Delidan. We are convinced that this product can sell on the English market, and we think that the packing are both original and very attractive. So far we will order a sample of

12 boxes of 20 each Delidan
at a price of £11 a box
Less discount, delivery immediately.
Have you let a new advertising material make to Delidan?
If so we will have leaflets and prospective exhibition signboard sends with the order.
We will keep you informed of our customer’s opinion about Delidan.



Svar #1
19. september 2006 af anji (Slettet)

Er der ingen som vil rette den?

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Svar #2
19. september 2006 af mommom (Slettet)

Det ser fint ud, når jeg læser det. Men jeg er også kun matematiker..

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Svar #3
19. september 2006 af mm :) (Slettet)

We revert to our letter from 1 September 19 - and your friendly reply of 5 September and we send enclosed cheque of £716, - at full settlement of the balance of our account. We take the opportunity to thank you for the extend credit. Our insurance company will compensate us the damage we loss by fire in our attendance department and the department is able to work normally again.
It interests us very much to see and try sample of your new goods Delidan. We are convinced that this product can sell on the English market, and we think that the packing is both original and very attractive. So far we will order a sample of

12 boxes of 20 each Delidan
at a price of £11 a box
Less discount, immediate delivery.
Have you let new advertising material be made to Delidan?
If so we will have leaflets and prospective exhibition signboard sent to us with the order. We will keep you informed of our customers’ opinion about Delidan.


Det er hele teksten med rettelserne.

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Svar #4
19. september 2006 af mm :) (Slettet)

undskyld, der manglede et par ting;

We revert to our letter from 1 September 19 - and your friendly reply of 5 September and we send enclosed cheque of £716 - at full settlement of the balance of our account. We take the opportunity to thank you for the extended credit. Our insurance company will compensate us the damage we loss by fire in our attendance department and the department is able to work normally again.
It interests us very much to see and try sample of your new goods Delidan. We are convinced that this product can sell on the English market, and we think that the packing is both original and very attractive. So far we will order a sample of

12 boxes of 20 each Delidan
at a price of £11 a box
Less discount, immediate delivery.
Have you let new advertising material be made to Delidan?
If so we will have leaflets and prospective exhibition signboard sent to us with the order. We will keep you informed of our customers’ opinion about Delidan.

Såeh..

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Svar #5
19. september 2006 af mm :) (Slettet)

ejjj... Her er den fulde rettelse;

We revert to our letter from 1 September 19 - and your friendly reply of 5 September and we send enclosed cheque of £716 - at full settlement of the balance of our account. We take the opportunity to thank you for the extended credit. Our insurance company will compensate us the damage we lost at a fire in our attendance department and the department is able to work normally again.
It interests us very much to see and try sample of your new goods Delidan. We are convinced that this product can sell on the English market, and we think that the packing is both original and very attractive. So far we will order a sample of

12 boxes of 20 each Delidan
at a price of £11 a box
Less discount, immediate delivery.
Have you let new advertising material be made to Delidan?
If so we will have leaflets and prospective exhibition signboard sent to us with the order. We will keep you informed of our customers’ opinion about Delidan.

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