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HASTER rettelse mm.

19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)
HASTER !

Jeg skal aflevere dette imorgen om filmen American Beauty. Og det er meget vigtigt at sproget er godt, grammatikken korrekt, og vigtigts af alt KORT beskrevet og GODT.
Hvis I har nogel tilføjelser eller guldkorn, vil jeg meget gerne høre ! (: På forhånd mange mange tak! Har virkelig brug for hjælp

Svar #1
19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

This comedy movie is about the life of an apparent ordinary American family and how it develops itself. But it does so in a very strange and uncanny way. The movie revolves around broken youth dreams, the demands of love, perfection at its worst, psychical survival and seeing all the beauty in life before it’s to late.

The movie contains of tree different kind of filming:
Ricky’s filming, that’s (urolige) and blurred.
Lester’s dreams about Angela.
The pictures of the empty “perfect” life.

All scenes are very simple; Few persons, few colors, few details. All unnecessary things are been cut out, to make it simple. This is actually smart of the director, because the story he want to tell, is in a way pretty confusing and complicated, so by cutting all superfluous things out, it all became simpler to the observer. An example could be the scenes in the suburb. There are no unusual houses or plants, there are no cars driving around or people walking, and gardens do nearly look identical.

One more thing –making it all simple is the red color. Red is a very strong and symbolizes color often used to symbolize love or death.
Red things in the film: The roses, Lester’s new car, there front door, Lester’s bloody head and so on. And I think that the symbols in this movie are: The need of love; Caroline takes so much care for her roses and it can (skyldes) her missing love. They are her proud, cause they are so perfect just like herself. Lester’s dreams of Angela roseleaves always (indtræder), cause they’re beautiful, and he needs love. They are soft and glowing when they careful cover Angela’s body. The Red front door can be a sign, telling us something dramatic soon will happen.

“American Beauty” is the name of a rose. And the central beauty in this movie is also the rose. Caroline’s roses are beautiful, Angela is beauty (with roseleaves around her).But later in the film, we are told that this isn’t really the beauty of life. The beauty of life can be many things, normal things like the plastic back. And if you haven’t discovered that yet, you may have wasted your life – Like Lester. American Beauty is the search of real beauty in life.

Kevin Spacey playing Lester Burnham won an Oscar being the best actor, which I agree in. He really is fantastic playing this roll. But I would say, that Sam Mendes is the one deserving all excitement. It is a really fantastic movie, telling about very familiar things, most of us don’t notice like the real beauty in world. And it is truly an important message, that all of us should consider what really beauty is and appreciate it before its too late.



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Svar #2
19. september 2006 af catchmer (Slettet)

sikke en mundfuld..
har du ik forældre der kan hjælpe med lige netop det der?

Svar #3
19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

nope. De kan ikke engelsk

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Svar #4
19. september 2006 af catchmer (Slettet)

stakkels dig
så må du jo tage chancen og aflevere det som det er

Svar #5
19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

Håbede på at nogle måske ville læse det igennem og komme med eventuelle rettelser

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Svar #6
19. september 2006 af catchmer (Slettet)

jeg tvivler pga. længden

Svar #7
19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

Ja, men kan jo altid prøve, når jeg ikke har hjælp at hente andre steder fra

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Svar #8
19. september 2006 af catchmer (Slettet)

sandt

Svar #9
19. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

ingen som vil være meget meget venlig sindet lige at gennemlæse? Alt hjælp modtages med stor stor tak

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Svar #10
20. september 2006 af mm :) (Slettet)

The movie contains of tree different kind of filming:
Ricky’s filming, that’s unstable and blurred.
Lester dreams about Angela.
The pictures of the empty “perfect” life.

All scenes are very simple; Few persons, few colours, few details. All unnecessary things are been cut out in order to make it simple. This is actually clever of the director to do, because the story he want to tell is in a way pretty confusing and complicated, so by cutting all the superfluous things out it all becomes simpler to the observer. An example could be the scenes in the suburb. There are no unusual houses or plants, there are no cars driving around or people walking, and gardens do nearly look identical.

One more thing that helps make it simple is the red colour. Red is a emotionally strong colour which is often used to symbolize love or death.
Red things that are included in the movie are for instance the roses, Lester’s new car, their front door, Lester’s bloody head and so on.
I believe that the symbols in this movie are: The desire for love; the reason Caroline takes so much care of her roses can possibly be due to the lack of love in her life.
They are her pride, because they are so perfect just like her. Lester’s dreams of Angela covered in roseleavesalways take part, because they’re beautiful, and he needs love. They are soft and glowing when they carefully cover Angela’s body. The Red front door can be a sign giving us a hint that something dramatic will take place soon enough.

“American Beauty” is the name of a rose. And the central beauty in this movie is the rose as well. Caroline’s roses are beautiful; Angela is beauty (with roseleaves around her).
The main message of the film is that we should realize that this isn’t what life is about. The beauty of life can be various things; ordinary objects like for instance the plastic back. And if you haven’t discovered that yet, you may have wasted your life – Like Lester. American Beauty is the search of real beauty in life.

Kevin Spacey playing Lester Burnham won an Oscar for being the best actor, which I agree on. He really is fantastic at playing his role. But I would say that Sam Mendes is the one who deserves more credit. It is a real fantastic movie, telling about very familiar things we don’t look upon as beauty in this world. It is truly an important message that all of us should consider what real beauty is and appreciate it before its too late.




Jeg har rettet de fejl jeg kunne få øje på.
Lærer hader nå man siger "cause" i stedet for because, for det er nemlig slang..
og de fleste lærer vil heller have os til at skrive på den engelske måde i stedet for den amerikanske, så skriv colour i stedet for color..

Svar #11
21. september 2006 af Sannaen (Slettet)

Hejsa, tak for din retning (: Men det var desværre for sent og stilen er afleveret /: Men tak alligevel. Det var en fejl fra min side, skulle have skrevet, at den var afleveret. Men tusind tak alligevel

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