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elngelsk 150 ord
24. september 2006 af
elna (Slettet)
hej allesammen jeg har lavet en engelsk oversættelse.... tænkte om nogen gad rette den for grammatiske fejl osv.... har ikke vedlagt den danske tekst da jeg ikke mener den er nødvendig.
According to the expert knowledge, has about half of the Danish population an unusual bad condition. We move us simply to little in spite of the fact that we know so much about the importance of keeping in good form.
This bad situation is probably caused by the fact that many still has the idea that they have to suffer for healthy. They are totally wrong: overdo of physical exercise seams to be harmful for the body and it can weaken the immune defence, whereas regular exercise has big importance of the health.
The daily cycle ride is there for an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. Not only does the bike solve some of the moderns societies problems with transport problems, it also helps us keeping in shape. It isn’t so dangerous to cycle, as many thinks, if you only look where you are, don’t take chances and follow the traffic regulations.
According to the expert knowledge, has about half of the Danish population an unusual bad condition. We move us simply to little in spite of the fact that we know so much about the importance of keeping in good form.
This bad situation is probably caused by the fact that many still has the idea that they have to suffer for healthy. They are totally wrong: overdo of physical exercise seams to be harmful for the body and it can weaken the immune defence, whereas regular exercise has big importance of the health.
The daily cycle ride is there for an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. Not only does the bike solve some of the moderns societies problems with transport problems, it also helps us keeping in shape. It isn’t so dangerous to cycle, as many thinks, if you only look where you are, don’t take chances and follow the traffic regulations.
Svar #1
24. september 2006 af Dominik Hasek (Slettet)
#0:
Naturligvis skal det danske tekst vedlægges!
Naturligvis skal det danske tekst vedlægges!
Svar #2
24. september 2006 af elna (Slettet)
jamen det er jo kun gramatisk jeg vil ha rettet... men okay.... her kommer det:
ifølge sagkundskaben har omkring halvdelen af den danske befolkning en ualmindelig dårlig kondition. vi bevæger os simpelthen for lidt på trods af at vi ved så meget om vigtigheden af at holde os i form.
at det står så dårligt til skyldes sikkert at mange stadig har den opfattelse at de skal lide for sundheden. de teger helt fejl: overdreven fysisk træning synes at være skadelig for kroppen og at kunne svække immunforsvaret, hvorimod regelmæssig motion er af stor betydning.
den daglige cykeltur er derfor en glimrende mulighed for at slå to fluer med et smæk. ikke alene løser cyklen nogle af det moderne samfunds transportproblemer, den er samtidig med til at holde os i form. det er heller ikke så farligt at cykle som mange tror, hvis man bare ser sig godt for, undlader at tage chancer og følger færdselsreglerne.
ifølge sagkundskaben har omkring halvdelen af den danske befolkning en ualmindelig dårlig kondition. vi bevæger os simpelthen for lidt på trods af at vi ved så meget om vigtigheden af at holde os i form.
at det står så dårligt til skyldes sikkert at mange stadig har den opfattelse at de skal lide for sundheden. de teger helt fejl: overdreven fysisk træning synes at være skadelig for kroppen og at kunne svække immunforsvaret, hvorimod regelmæssig motion er af stor betydning.
den daglige cykeltur er derfor en glimrende mulighed for at slå to fluer med et smæk. ikke alene løser cyklen nogle af det moderne samfunds transportproblemer, den er samtidig med til at holde os i form. det er heller ikke så farligt at cykle som mange tror, hvis man bare ser sig godt for, undlader at tage chancer og følger færdselsreglerne.
Svar #3
24. september 2006 af TanteOda (Slettet)
Hej Elna,
Her er en håndfuld ting, du skal kigge på:
According to the expert knowledge, has about half of the Danish population an unusual bad condition. /Fjern "the" og ryk "has" hen efter "population". Brug et andet ord for kondition, condition er ikke helt det rigtige ord.
We move us simply to little /bør skrives om - og "to" i denne forbindelse bør være "too".
many still has the idea that they have to suffer for healthy /brug ikke y på healthy, sætningen bør omskrives, klinger ikke godt.
overdo of physical exercise seams to be harmful for the body /prøv "overdoing physical exercising seems...". Prøv iøvrigt at finde et andet ord i stedet for overdoing, hvis du kan.
for the body /to the body
the immune defence /"immune system" er måske et bedre ord.
whereas regular exercise has big importance of the health. / ikke "of the health" men "to the health"
The daily cycle ride /bicycle ride
The daily cycle ride is there for an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. /jeg forstår hvad du mener, men det ville en englændere ikke! "Is there for", what do you say???
Not only does the bike solve some of the moderns societies problems with transport problems /"modern society" - sætningen bør iøvrigt omskrives - indsæt fx ikke ordet "problems" to gange i samme sætning.
It isn’t so dangerous to cycle /bicycle igen.. og "that" i stedet for "so"
traffic regulations /regulations er helt sikkert det forkerte ord brugt her.
Når du har rettet lidt på teksten, må du gerne smide den ind igen.
Mvh
TanteOda
Her er en håndfuld ting, du skal kigge på:
According to the expert knowledge, has about half of the Danish population an unusual bad condition. /Fjern "the" og ryk "has" hen efter "population". Brug et andet ord for kondition, condition er ikke helt det rigtige ord.
We move us simply to little /bør skrives om - og "to" i denne forbindelse bør være "too".
many still has the idea that they have to suffer for healthy /brug ikke y på healthy, sætningen bør omskrives, klinger ikke godt.
overdo of physical exercise seams to be harmful for the body /prøv "overdoing physical exercising seems...". Prøv iøvrigt at finde et andet ord i stedet for overdoing, hvis du kan.
for the body /to the body
the immune defence /"immune system" er måske et bedre ord.
whereas regular exercise has big importance of the health. / ikke "of the health" men "to the health"
The daily cycle ride /bicycle ride
The daily cycle ride is there for an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. /jeg forstår hvad du mener, men det ville en englændere ikke! "Is there for", what do you say???
Not only does the bike solve some of the moderns societies problems with transport problems /"modern society" - sætningen bør iøvrigt omskrives - indsæt fx ikke ordet "problems" to gange i samme sætning.
It isn’t so dangerous to cycle /bicycle igen.. og "that" i stedet for "so"
traffic regulations /regulations er helt sikkert det forkerte ord brugt her.
Når du har rettet lidt på teksten, må du gerne smide den ind igen.
Mvh
TanteOda
Svar #4
26. september 2006 af elna (Slettet)
her r den ige med rettelserne... nogle af rettelserne kunne jeg ikk finde ud af, så som at finde nye ord, for dem du bad mig ændre havde jeg fundet i ordbogen:-S kan du evt fortælle mig ud fra mine fejl hvad det er jeg skal træne. er meget dårlig til grammatik så ved ikke hvad de fejl jeg laver hedder:-S..... på forhånd tak....
According to expert knowledge, about half of the Danish population has an unusual bad condition. We exercise simply too little in spite of the fact that we know so much about the importance of keeping in good form.
This bad situation is probably caused by the fact that many still has the idea that they have to suffer for a better health. They are totally wrong: overdoing of physical exercise seams to be harmful to the body and it can weaken the immune system, whereas regular exercise has big importance to the health.
The daily bicycle ride is that’s why an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. Not only does the bike solve some of the modern society problems with transport problems, it also helps us keeping in shape. It isn’t that dangerous to bicycle, as many thinks, if you only look where you are, don’t take chances and follow the traffic regulations.
According to expert knowledge, about half of the Danish population has an unusual bad condition. We exercise simply too little in spite of the fact that we know so much about the importance of keeping in good form.
This bad situation is probably caused by the fact that many still has the idea that they have to suffer for a better health. They are totally wrong: overdoing of physical exercise seams to be harmful to the body and it can weaken the immune system, whereas regular exercise has big importance to the health.
The daily bicycle ride is that’s why an brilliant opportunity to kill two birds with one stone. Not only does the bike solve some of the modern society problems with transport problems, it also helps us keeping in shape. It isn’t that dangerous to bicycle, as many thinks, if you only look where you are, don’t take chances and follow the traffic regulations.
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