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Rettelse af mindre tekst
16. oktober 2006 af
ma_thilde (Slettet)
Dette drejer sig hovedsageligt om Udsagnsord-Fremtid....
Dansk:
Når jeg bliver Englands statsminister.
Hver aften beder jeg [om], at jeg en dag kan blive statsminister. Det bliver spændende. Så vil jeg gøre verden bedre end i dag; når jeg bliver landets leder, sender vi alle de gamle politikere (politican) hjem. Alle mennesker får et rart sted at bo. Men de skal aflevere (give up) deres biler, så vi får mindre (less) forurening.
Jeg vil også sørge form at alle får et godt arbejde; ingen behøver at være arbejdsløs i min fagre (brave) nye verden.
Når først (once) vi får magten, synger fuglene; sorte, røde, brune og hvide børn går hånd i hånd; folk holder op med at slås; alle mennesker er venlige mod (to) hinanden.
Og vores gamle gnavne (grouchy) nabo, hr. Humphrey, flytter til Wales, hvor han holder grise og får.
Det er kun en drøm - men jeg håber, den bliver til virkelighed (come true) en dag.
English:
When I am the premier minister of England.
I pray evry night, that I will be the prime minister of England. It is going to be exciting. Then I will do the worl better then today; when I am the leader of the country, we are about to send all the old politican back home. All people will get a good place to live. But they have to give up their cars, so we get less pollution.
I shall also take care of that evryone will get a good job; no one have to be unemployed in my brave new World.
Once we get the power; the bird sings, black, red, brown and white childrens will go hand in hand; people will stop fighting: evry people are friendly to each other.
Our old grouchy neighbour, Mr. Humphrey, is moving to Wales, where he pigs and sheeps.
It is only a dream – but I hope, it will come true one day.
På forhånd tak
Mathilde
Dansk:
Når jeg bliver Englands statsminister.
Hver aften beder jeg [om], at jeg en dag kan blive statsminister. Det bliver spændende. Så vil jeg gøre verden bedre end i dag; når jeg bliver landets leder, sender vi alle de gamle politikere (politican) hjem. Alle mennesker får et rart sted at bo. Men de skal aflevere (give up) deres biler, så vi får mindre (less) forurening.
Jeg vil også sørge form at alle får et godt arbejde; ingen behøver at være arbejdsløs i min fagre (brave) nye verden.
Når først (once) vi får magten, synger fuglene; sorte, røde, brune og hvide børn går hånd i hånd; folk holder op med at slås; alle mennesker er venlige mod (to) hinanden.
Og vores gamle gnavne (grouchy) nabo, hr. Humphrey, flytter til Wales, hvor han holder grise og får.
Det er kun en drøm - men jeg håber, den bliver til virkelighed (come true) en dag.
English:
When I am the premier minister of England.
I pray evry night, that I will be the prime minister of England. It is going to be exciting. Then I will do the worl better then today; when I am the leader of the country, we are about to send all the old politican back home. All people will get a good place to live. But they have to give up their cars, so we get less pollution.
I shall also take care of that evryone will get a good job; no one have to be unemployed in my brave new World.
Once we get the power; the bird sings, black, red, brown and white childrens will go hand in hand; people will stop fighting: evry people are friendly to each other.
Our old grouchy neighbour, Mr. Humphrey, is moving to Wales, where he pigs and sheeps.
It is only a dream – but I hope, it will come true one day.
På forhånd tak
Mathilde
Svar #1
17. oktober 2006 af curium (Slettet)
Her er et hurtigt forslag.
When I become the prime minister of England.
Every night I pray that I will become the prime minister of England. It will be exciting. Then I will make the world better than today; when I become the leader of the country, we will send all of the old politicians back home. Everybody will get a pleasant place to live. But they will have to give up their cars, so that we will get less pollution.
I will also make sure that everyone will get a good job; nobody will have to be unemployed in my brave
(jeg ville godt nok sige “fair”, men hvis “brave” står der i forvejen er du vel nødt til at bruge det)
new world.
Once we get the power the birds will sing; black, red, brown and white children will walk hand in hand; people will stop fighting: everybody will be kind to each other.
Our old grouchy neighbour, Mr. Humphrey, will move to Wales, where he will keep pigs and sheep.
It is only a dream – but I hope it will come true some day.
Håber, det kan bruges.
When I become the prime minister of England.
Every night I pray that I will become the prime minister of England. It will be exciting. Then I will make the world better than today; when I become the leader of the country, we will send all of the old politicians back home. Everybody will get a pleasant place to live. But they will have to give up their cars, so that we will get less pollution.
I will also make sure that everyone will get a good job; nobody will have to be unemployed in my brave
(jeg ville godt nok sige “fair”, men hvis “brave” står der i forvejen er du vel nødt til at bruge det)
new world.
Once we get the power the birds will sing; black, red, brown and white children will walk hand in hand; people will stop fighting: everybody will be kind to each other.
Our old grouchy neighbour, Mr. Humphrey, will move to Wales, where he will keep pigs and sheep.
It is only a dream – but I hope it will come true some day.
Håber, det kan bruges.
Svar #3
17. oktober 2006 af ma_thilde (Slettet)
Jeg undrer mig lidt over denne sætning:
...we will send all of the old politicians back home....
Kan man ikke nøjes med at sige:
..we will send all (of) the old politicians back home...
Er det bare mig eller???
Mathilde
...we will send all of the old politicians back home....
Kan man ikke nøjes med at sige:
..we will send all (of) the old politicians back home...
Er det bare mig eller???
Mathilde
Svar #4
19. oktober 2006 af curium (Slettet)
Du har ret. Her er det bedst at undlade "of" - ved ikke lige, hvad jeg tænkte...
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