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Rettelse :)
State school with good conscience
Next year my daughter will go to school. A thing I should look forward to. Unfortunately I am more concerned than I am anxious. Our state school isn’t good enough. Countless of cancelled lessons, no or very old books, worn out rooms with bad indoor clima and the scool leadership is so far away from the teachers, that they don’t even know what is going on among them. E.g teachers who are forced to teach in lessons, they don’t know anything about. Not exactly the best start to a long edducationlife for our children.
The hole schoolsystem is in it’s structure too bad, and if we should send our children to school with a good conscience, us parents have to do something about this problem. I want to see changes. Partly to the municipality, partly to us self.
For the minicipality part, because they have to tighten up and live up to a higher standard on this area. And to our own, to get used to think more about what we can do as parents to secure our children a safe shcooling.
Svar #2
22. oktober 2006 af Qras (Slettet)
Ja, uden den danske tekst er det svært..
Måske en stavefejl, men: hole = whole :)
Svar #3
22. oktober 2006 af sølvskål (Slettet)
Hvis der er én der gider at rette, behøver det ikke at være lige som jeg har skrevet det. I må gerne komme med andre forslag og andre vendinger. :)
Svar #4
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
clima --> climate
scool --> school
edducationlife --> education life
schoolsystem --> school system
"system is in it's structure" --> "system is in its structure"
minicipality --> municipality
shcooling --> schooling
Flotte engelske sætningsopbygninger. :-)
Svar #5
22. oktober 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Svar #6
22. oktober 2006 af sølvskål (Slettet)
Mange tak for det!
Var sikker på, at det meste var forkert. Tak skal du have Zeta :)
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