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09. november 2006 af
Hans20 (Slettet)
Hej ., hvis der er lige nogen som vil rette den for felj :
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. After my opinion I think that capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody shall play God and judge other people how long they should live. Both sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment could man use on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment shall not be use on people who had stealed money or made something else. Because there is big difference between a person who had kill someone and the another person who had steal something. If someone should execute then I think the best way will be with a syringe,because it’s like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we not should insert capital punishment. Both I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she not makes crimi things again. I think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman to capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we insert capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who had made a crimi thing dont have it good with them self what the have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I’m not angree in that. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentence are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
Hej ., hvis der er lige nogen som vil rette den for felj :
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. After my opinion I think that capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody shall play God and judge other people how long they should live. Both sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment could man use on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment shall not be use on people who had stealed money or made something else. Because there is big difference between a person who had kill someone and the another person who had steal something. If someone should execute then I think the best way will be with a syringe,because it’s like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we not should insert capital punishment. Both I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she not makes crimi things again. I think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman to capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we insert capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who had made a crimi thing dont have it good with them self what the have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I’m not angree in that. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentence are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
Svar #1
09. november 2006 af Hans20 (Slettet)
Ret den her hvis i hvis vil ., I den første er der noget del felj :-
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. After my opinion I think that capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody shall play God and judge other people how long they should live. Both sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment should be used on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment shall not be use on people who had stealed money or made something else. Because there is big difference between a person who had kill someone and the another person who had steal something. If someone should execute then I think the best way will be with a syringe,because it’s like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we should insert capital punishment. Both I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she not makes crimi things again. I think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman to capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we insert capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who had made a crimi thing dont have it good with them self what the have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I’m not angree in that. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentence are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. After my opinion I think that capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody shall play God and judge other people how long they should live. Both sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment should be used on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment shall not be use on people who had stealed money or made something else. Because there is big difference between a person who had kill someone and the another person who had steal something. If someone should execute then I think the best way will be with a syringe,because it’s like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we should insert capital punishment. Both I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she not makes crimi things again. I think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman to capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we insert capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who had made a crimi thing dont have it good with them self what the have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I’m not angree in that. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentence are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
Svar #2
09. november 2006 af godfy (Slettet)
Ret for felj : -
d. 09-11-2006 kl. 21:33 af Alinho
Hej ., hvis der er lige nogen som vil rette den for felj :
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. In my opinion capital punishment is a bad thing, because nobody should be God or judge how long other peopleshould live. But sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. (The capital punishment could man use on people who had made big crimi things.) The capital punishment should not be used on people who has commited crimes such as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant. Because there is big difference between a person who kills someone and the one who steals something. If someone should be executed then I think the best way will be with a syringe, because it is like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we should have capital punishment. But I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot crimines. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she does not commit crimes again. I also think that the law-court needs many evidence to sentence a man or a woman for capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote that we have capital punishment in Denmark. (I think that the people who has commited crimes dont have it good with them self what the have do.) I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I dont angree with the sentence. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentences are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few years and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live
Har rettet her og der .. forstår ik helt de sætninger som jeg har puttet i parenteser () .. Og kig lige efter stave fejl og grammatik en gang til :)
d. 09-11-2006 kl. 21:33 af Alinho
Hej ., hvis der er lige nogen som vil rette den for felj :
My opinion.
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. In my opinion capital punishment is a bad thing, because nobody should be God or judge how long other peopleshould live. But sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. (The capital punishment could man use on people who had made big crimi things.) The capital punishment should not be used on people who has commited crimes such as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant. Because there is big difference between a person who kills someone and the one who steals something. If someone should be executed then I think the best way will be with a syringe, because it is like a sleeping pill. I dont think that in Denmark we should have capital punishment. But I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot crimines. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she does not commit crimes again. I also think that the law-court needs many evidence to sentence a man or a woman for capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote that we have capital punishment in Denmark. (I think that the people who has commited crimes dont have it good with them self what the have do.) I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I dont angree with the sentence. I dont think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentences are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few years and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live
Har rettet her og der .. forstår ik helt de sætninger som jeg har puttet i parenteser () .. Og kig lige efter stave fejl og grammatik en gang til :)
Svar #3
09. november 2006 af godfy (Slettet)
Og husk lige BOTH og BUT .. forskellige ord ik
Forresten rettede jeg den første, men du ka jo se hvilke ændringer der er .. have to go!
Forresten rettede jeg den første, men du ka jo se hvilke ændringer der er .. have to go!
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