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11. november 2006 af
Hans20 (Slettet)
Hej ., fik lavet noget om på teksten så hvis der er nogen som lige gider og tjek den ., og ret hvis der er noget .,
My opinion
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. In my opinion capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody should be God or judge how long other people should live. But sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment could be used on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment should not be used on people who has commited crimes as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant. Because there is big difference between a person who had kills someone and the one who had steals something. If someone should executed then I think the best way will be with a syringe, because it is like a sleeping pill. I dont think that we in Denmark should have capital punishment. But I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she does not crimi things again. I also think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman for capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we have capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who has commited crimis dont have it good with them self what they have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I dont agree with the sentence . I think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentences are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
på forhånd tak
My opinion
I would like to write my opinion about capital punishment. In my opinion capital punishment is bad thing, because nobody should be God or judge how long other people should live. But sometimes the capital punishment is a good thing. The capital punishment could be used on people who had made big crimi things. The capital punishment should not be used on people who has commited crimes as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant. Because there is big difference between a person who had kills someone and the one who had steals something. If someone should executed then I think the best way will be with a syringe, because it is like a sleeping pill. I dont think that we in Denmark should have capital punishment. But I think the sentence should be harder in Denmark, like maybe longer time in prison. If we make the sentence harder there will not be a lot criminality. I think that the most importent thing is when the culprit comes out of the prison that he/she does not crimi things again. I also think that the law-court needs many evindence to sentence a man or a woman for capital punishment. If a person kills somebody of my family I will be the first person who will vote for that we have capital punishment in Denmark. I think that the people who has commited crimis dont have it good with them self what they have do. I have seen that Saddam Hussein is sentence to death. And I dont agree with the sentence . I think that another country should sentence him. I think that in the USA the sentences are not fair. You can kill a person and be in prison in few and do the same thing again.
No one shall judge somebody how long they should live.
på forhånd tak
Svar #1
11. november 2006 af Mariposa88 (Slettet)
"The capital punishment could be used on people who had made big crimi things" -> have made big criminal things.
"...people who has commited crimes as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant" -> "...people who have commited crimes such as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant"
"person who had kills someone and the one who had steals something" -> "person who has killed someone and the one who has stolen something"
"he/she does not crimi things again" -> "he/she does not do criminal things again"
"many evindence" -> "a lot of evindence"
"will vote for that we have capital punishment in Denmark" -> "will vote for capital punishment in Denmark"
"dont have it good with them self" -> "dont feel good about them selves"
"be in prison in few" Går ud fra du mener "be in prison in a few years"
Der er også nogle andre småfejl, men det var lige det jeg gad :p
"...people who has commited crimes as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant" -> "...people who have commited crimes such as stealing money or other crimes which are not significant"
"person who had kills someone and the one who had steals something" -> "person who has killed someone and the one who has stolen something"
"he/she does not crimi things again" -> "he/she does not do criminal things again"
"many evindence" -> "a lot of evindence"
"will vote for that we have capital punishment in Denmark" -> "will vote for capital punishment in Denmark"
"dont have it good with them self" -> "dont feel good about them selves"
"be in prison in few" Går ud fra du mener "be in prison in a few years"
Der er også nogle andre småfejl, men det var lige det jeg gad :p
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