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11. november 2006 af
barbie_girl (Slettet)
Forældre og børn
Mange forældre er bekymrede over , at tiderne har ændret sig .I gamle dage behøvede man ikke være bange for at lade sine teenage -børn gå ud om aftenen . Men nu om dage
kan unge mennesker ikke gå på diskotek om lørdagen , uden at deres forældre er bekymrede over , om de kommer hjem i eet stykke .Den anonyme (random) vold er vokset , uden at politikerne har kunnet gøre noget ved det . Men på trods af , at det er farligt at gå i byen om aftenen , er der ingen tvivl om , at det er umuligt at fordybe de unge mennesker
at mødes. Mange forældre vil gerne have et bevis på , at deres teenagere faktisk er der , hvor de har fortalt forældrene , at de er ; men børnene vil ikke høre tale om at skullle adlyde ordrer . De vil have det sjovt og og ville ikke drømme om at acceptere en regel om at skulle være hjemme til midnat . Der er derfor ingen tvivl om , at forældrenes nattesøvn vil blive ved med at være urolig , sålænge de har børn i teenage-alderen, og det skyldes ,at børn og unge vil have det sjovt . På trods , at forældre elsker deres børn , kan de nogen gange blive meget irriterede over , at de aldrig får søvn nok i weekenderne. Men i stedet for at have noget imod , at børnene går i byen i weekenderne, kan forældrene se frem til , at børnene bliver gamle nok til at flytte hjemmefra. Så kan de gamle forældre gå tidligt i seng og være glad over , at de kan sove længe næste dag.
Parents and children
Many parents are worried about , that times have changed. In old days you didn't need to be afraid of letting your teenage-children go out in the evening . But now at days
can't young people go in the disco on Sutardays , without their parents being worried about them coming home in one piece. The random violence has been growing , without the politicians have been able to do something about that . But despite that it is dangerous to go out in town at night , is there no doubt , that it is impossible to absord young people from getting together.Many parents want to have proof of that their teenagers actually are there where they have told their parents that they are ; but the children don't want to hear about obeying orders . They want to have fun and couldn't dream about accepting the roule of being home at midnight .There is therefore no doubt , that the parents's night's sleep will continue being concerned , so long they have children in the age between 13 and 19 years old , and it is due to children and young ones wanting to have fun. Despite that the parents love their kids , may they sometimes be very annoyed about them never getting sleep on weekend's. But instead of having something against their kids going out on weekend's , can the parents look forward that kids get old enough to leave home.Then can the old parents go early in bed and being happy about that they can sleep long the next day.
Mange forældre er bekymrede over , at tiderne har ændret sig .I gamle dage behøvede man ikke være bange for at lade sine teenage -børn gå ud om aftenen . Men nu om dage
kan unge mennesker ikke gå på diskotek om lørdagen , uden at deres forældre er bekymrede over , om de kommer hjem i eet stykke .Den anonyme (random) vold er vokset , uden at politikerne har kunnet gøre noget ved det . Men på trods af , at det er farligt at gå i byen om aftenen , er der ingen tvivl om , at det er umuligt at fordybe de unge mennesker
at mødes. Mange forældre vil gerne have et bevis på , at deres teenagere faktisk er der , hvor de har fortalt forældrene , at de er ; men børnene vil ikke høre tale om at skullle adlyde ordrer . De vil have det sjovt og og ville ikke drømme om at acceptere en regel om at skulle være hjemme til midnat . Der er derfor ingen tvivl om , at forældrenes nattesøvn vil blive ved med at være urolig , sålænge de har børn i teenage-alderen, og det skyldes ,at børn og unge vil have det sjovt . På trods , at forældre elsker deres børn , kan de nogen gange blive meget irriterede over , at de aldrig får søvn nok i weekenderne. Men i stedet for at have noget imod , at børnene går i byen i weekenderne, kan forældrene se frem til , at børnene bliver gamle nok til at flytte hjemmefra. Så kan de gamle forældre gå tidligt i seng og være glad over , at de kan sove længe næste dag.
Parents and children
Many parents are worried about , that times have changed. In old days you didn't need to be afraid of letting your teenage-children go out in the evening . But now at days
can't young people go in the disco on Sutardays , without their parents being worried about them coming home in one piece. The random violence has been growing , without the politicians have been able to do something about that . But despite that it is dangerous to go out in town at night , is there no doubt , that it is impossible to absord young people from getting together.Many parents want to have proof of that their teenagers actually are there where they have told their parents that they are ; but the children don't want to hear about obeying orders . They want to have fun and couldn't dream about accepting the roule of being home at midnight .There is therefore no doubt , that the parents's night's sleep will continue being concerned , so long they have children in the age between 13 and 19 years old , and it is due to children and young ones wanting to have fun. Despite that the parents love their kids , may they sometimes be very annoyed about them never getting sleep on weekend's. But instead of having something against their kids going out on weekend's , can the parents look forward that kids get old enough to leave home.Then can the old parents go early in bed and being happy about that they can sleep long the next day.
Svar #2
11. november 2006 af lulu90 (Slettet)
skal den oversættes direkte eller må man godt lave lidt op så det lyder bedre?
Svar #3
11. november 2006 af lulu90 (Slettet)
Many parents are worried about, that times have changed. In old days you didn't have to be afraid of letting your teenage-children out in the evening. But now at days young people can’t go on discos on Saturdays, without their parents being worried about them coming home in one piece. The random violence is grown, without the politicians have been able to do something(anything) about that . But despites, that it is dangerous to go out (in town) at night, there is no doubt about, that it is impossible to disallow young people from meeting. Many parents want to have a proof of that their teenagers actually are, where they have told their parents they would be; but the children don't want to hear about obeying orders. They want to have fun and couldn't dream about accepting the rule about being home at midnight .There is therefore no doubt , that the parents’ night sleep will continue being concerned, as long as they have teenage children (in the age between 13 and 19 years old ,) and it is due to children and young ones that they want to have fun. Despite that the parents love their kids, they may sometimes be very annoyed about them never getting sleep on weekend's. But instead of having something against their kids going out on weekends, the parents can look forward to when the kids get old enough to leave home. Then the old parents can go early in bed and being pleased about that they can sleep long the next day.
Så ser den vidst lidt bedre ud.. til en anden gang skal du kigge mere på din ENGELSKE ordstilling, din er meget dansk.. Knus mig..
Så ser den vidst lidt bedre ud.. til en anden gang skal du kigge mere på din ENGELSKE ordstilling, din er meget dansk.. Knus mig..
Svar #4
11. november 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)
Generelt... Kig lige på dine kommaer... Der er alt for mange af dem..
Huske regel: Som regel aldrig komma foran that...
Huske regel: Som regel aldrig komma foran that...
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