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17. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Not every topic can catch my attention, as racism did and still do. Racism has a big role on the earth for the time being. Such as the conflict between Denmark and many Muslims countries, because of the twelve drawings of Muhammad in a Danish newspaper Friday, 30. September 2005. Not only racism is a bad thing but it’s also a crime against humanity and discrimination. Racist attitude is doesn’t only about colour but also the language, religion, and culture plays an important role too. Take an example, when the Jews under the World War II, were being killed(6. million died) in Nazi concentration camps, just because there were Jews!

For grammatiske fejl, sætninger.... osv.

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17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Not /every/(all) topic(s) can catch my attention, /as/(like) racism did and still do(es). Racism /has/(plays) a big role on the /earth/(Earth) /for the time being/(in the moment). Such as the conflict between Denmark and /many/(several) (of the) Muslim/s/ countries/,/ because of the twelve drawings of Muhammad in a Danish newspaper, Friday, /30. September/(September 30.) 2005. Not /only/(just) /racism/(the racist aspect) is /a bad thing/(terrible) but /it’s/ also /a/(the) crime against humanity and (racial) discrimination. Racist attitude is /doesn’t only/(not just) about (skin) colour /but/(,) /also/ the language, (the) religion, and (the) culture, plays an important role too. Take an example, when /the Jews under the World War II, were being killed/ (6 million Jews were killed) in Nazi concentration camps, just because /there/(they) were Jews!

...mit bud

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17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

/but/(,) /also/ --> /but/(-) /also/

(Brug en bindestreg istedet for kommaet.)

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Svar #3
17. november 2006 af Rixer (Slettet)

mit bud

Not all topics can catch my attention, like racism did and still es. Racism plays a big role on the Earth in the moment. Such as the conflict between Denmark and several of the Muslim countries because of the twelve drawings of Muhammad in a Danish newspaper, Friday, September 30. 2005. Not just the racist aspect is terrible but also the crime against humanity and racial discrimination. Racist attitude is not just skin colour, the language, the religion, and the culture, plays an important role too. Take an example, when 6 million Jews were killed in Nazi concentration camps, just because they were Jews!

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Svar #4
17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

For at undgå tvivl poster jeg lige den korrekte sætning:

"Racist attitude is not just about skin colour - the language, the religion, and the culture play an important role too."

Svar #5
17. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

mange mange tak.

Kan i forresten også kigge på denne tekst..

Racism can also have affect that you might not leave the house, and have psychic logical problems. If you might live in USA, you have to pay by yourself if a hospital is necessary or if you just need a simple test. Let me say it a bit easier so you can understand it: “without money, no treatment, even if you’re dieing!” (not in Denmark) How can people authorize that?

Svar #6
17. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

#2
Altså på denne måde?

-the crime against humanity

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Svar #7
17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#6.
Neej. Du kan se "den rigtige" sætning i #4.

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Svar #8
17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Jeg har ændret lidt i #5, så den lyder lidt bedre.

Racism can result in fear of leaving the house and in psychic logical problems. If you live in the US(A), you have to pay for any help at hospital or just even a simple test. Let me tell it a bit easier so you will be able to understand it, “without money, no treatment, even if you’re dying! Why can people authorize this?

Du har i øvrigt en del kongruens fejl og så "kludrer" du i mange af sætningerne.

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Svar #9
17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Jeg mangler lige et citationstegn efter 'dying'.

hospital --> hospitals

Svar #10
17. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Hvad vil det sige at det er "kongruens fejl" ?

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Svar #11
17. november 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#10.
At du bruger forkert verbum til grundleddet.

I has a lovely dog. (Forkert)
I have a lovely dog. (Rigtigt)

Svar #12
17. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

nååå okey.. så det er der bl.a. mit problem ligger, takker.

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