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18. november 2006 af
Lisa02 (Slettet)
Måske mange fejl, men er meget træt, og har skrevet det så godt jeg kunne, håber nogen kan rette den.
Fatima and Saret
Fatima is 16 years old muslim girl, who lives in Australia with her religious familiy.
Her mother Semra is a purse maker for a Greek businessman, where tourists come and buys some good things as a memery for being in Australia. Her two younger sisters; Melec, 9 and Nilgun, 12 helps making the puces. Semra does cut out the shape of Australia in fake kangaroos, while her daughters stuck these onto some plactic purces covers with glue, and Famtima’s job was to fill them up with tissue paper and sew in the zip.
Fatmia’s farther – Atilas – is a man with no humor! Semra really had recpeckt for him, and didn’t dare to do something wrong, that’s why she imedially on seeing her husband; went to the living room and cleared a seat from him, and imedially got Atilas his coffee and slippers.
Today Atila’s sister were coming with his son. Fatima didn’t liked her at all!
Fatima wanted to take out the baby for fresh air , but most bacause for her selvf!
She tooked a pram, and went out. On the street she bumped straight into Saret, a Cambodian(Asian) boy, who worked in a laundry. They began to talk, but she was soo scared if someone would see her, with a boy!! It seemed like they had a really good relationship, and that they liked each other a bit. Fatima’s aunt; Sadeet appeared, she were wearing a traditional Muslim dress, a full head scarf with a long-sleeved ankle-length dress, and holdning his cousin by her left hand. Sadeet and the boy stopped and were watching Fatima and Saret. Fatima said goodbye to Saret and were gone in a couple of sekunds. When they came home, the aunt were drinking coffe from gold-rimmecup, and Atila asked: ”So you want to marry the Asian boy now?” and they began to discuss. When Fatima did go for geeting more coffee for the aunt, as her farther did told her, they where talking about her to go to Turkey to meet Ali’s son. But Fatima didn’t want to, and was very angry at them. They didn’t knew the way things were in Australia, and sometimes it seemed as though they were living in defferent worlds. But her mother did supported her, and she didn’t wanted them to have a life as her self, she wanted her kids to have a better life that hers. And it ended with Saadet(aunt) saying that she should stop from the school, and lean how to cook, clean, manage the house and how to have babies… Fatima did go into her bedroom, and heard her mother closing the dor in the living room.
Fatima and Saret
Fatima is 16 years old muslim girl, who lives in Australia with her religious familiy.
Her mother Semra is a purse maker for a Greek businessman, where tourists come and buys some good things as a memery for being in Australia. Her two younger sisters; Melec, 9 and Nilgun, 12 helps making the puces. Semra does cut out the shape of Australia in fake kangaroos, while her daughters stuck these onto some plactic purces covers with glue, and Famtima’s job was to fill them up with tissue paper and sew in the zip.
Fatmia’s farther – Atilas – is a man with no humor! Semra really had recpeckt for him, and didn’t dare to do something wrong, that’s why she imedially on seeing her husband; went to the living room and cleared a seat from him, and imedially got Atilas his coffee and slippers.
Today Atila’s sister were coming with his son. Fatima didn’t liked her at all!
Fatima wanted to take out the baby for fresh air , but most bacause for her selvf!
She tooked a pram, and went out. On the street she bumped straight into Saret, a Cambodian(Asian) boy, who worked in a laundry. They began to talk, but she was soo scared if someone would see her, with a boy!! It seemed like they had a really good relationship, and that they liked each other a bit. Fatima’s aunt; Sadeet appeared, she were wearing a traditional Muslim dress, a full head scarf with a long-sleeved ankle-length dress, and holdning his cousin by her left hand. Sadeet and the boy stopped and were watching Fatima and Saret. Fatima said goodbye to Saret and were gone in a couple of sekunds. When they came home, the aunt were drinking coffe from gold-rimmecup, and Atila asked: ”So you want to marry the Asian boy now?” and they began to discuss. When Fatima did go for geeting more coffee for the aunt, as her farther did told her, they where talking about her to go to Turkey to meet Ali’s son. But Fatima didn’t want to, and was very angry at them. They didn’t knew the way things were in Australia, and sometimes it seemed as though they were living in defferent worlds. But her mother did supported her, and she didn’t wanted them to have a life as her self, she wanted her kids to have a better life that hers. And it ended with Saadet(aunt) saying that she should stop from the school, and lean how to cook, clean, manage the house and how to have babies… Fatima did go into her bedroom, and heard her mother closing the dor in the living room.
Svar #1
18. november 2006 af lulu90 (Slettet)
har selv i 9.klasse læst denne.. så retter den lige igennem engang;)
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d. 18-11-2006 kl. 00:32 af Lisa02
Måske mange fejl, men er meget træt, og har skrevet det så godt jeg kunne, håber nogen kan rette den.
Fatima and Saret
Fatima is (a) 16 years old muslim girl, who lives in Australia with her religious familiy.
Her mother Semra is a purse maker for a Greek businessman, where tourists come and buys (buy) some good things as a memery(memory) for being in Australia. Her two younger sisters; Melec, 9 and Nilgun, 12 helps making the puces(purses). Semra does cut (Semra cuts) out the shape of Australia in fake kangaroos(kangarooskin), while her daughters stuck(stick) these onto some plactic (plastic) purces covers (pursecovers) with glue, and Famtima’s job was to fill them up with tissue paper and sew in the zip.
Fatmia’s farther (father)– Atilas – is a man with no humor! Semra really had recpeckt for him,(Semra really respects him, sometimes she is afraid of him) and didn't(doesn't) dare to do something(anything) wrong, that’s why she imedially on seeing her husband(thats why, then he got home from work, she imedially); went to the living room and cleared a seat from(to) him, and imedially(quickly) got Atilas his coffee and slippers.
Today Atila’s sister were coming with his son. Fatima didn’t liked her at all!
Fatima wanted to take out the baby for fresh air (for some fresh air), but most bacause for her selvf(but mostly because of Atila's sister of course)!
She tooked(took) a pram, and went out. On the street she bumped straight into Saret, a Cambodian(Asian) boy, who worked(works) in a laundry. They began to talk, but she was soo scared if someone would see her, with a boy(the asian boy)!! It seemed like they had a really good relationship, and that they liked each other a bit. Fatima’s aunt; Sadeet appeared, she were wearing a traditional Muslim dress, a full head scarf with a long-sleeved ankle-length dress, and holdning his cousin by (in) her left hand. Sadeet and the boy stopped and were watching Fatima and Saret. Fatima said goodbye to Saret and were (and they were)gone in a couple of sekunds. When they came home, the aunt were drinking coffe from gold-rimmecup, and Atila asked: ”So you want to marry the Asian boy now?” and they began to discuss. When Fatima did go for geeting more coffee for the aunt,(when fatima went out in the kitchen to get more coffe to the aunt) as (slet as) her farther(father) did (slet did)told her, they where talking about her to go to Turkey to meet Ali’s son. But Fatima didn’t want to, and was very angry at them. They didn’t knew the way things were in Australia, and sometimes it seemed as though they were living in defferent(different) worlds. But her mother did(slet did)supported her, and she didn’t wanted (want) them to have a life as her self(slet self), she wanted her kids to have a better life that (than) hers. And it ended with Saadet(aunt) saying(said) that she should stop from the school(quit the school), and lean(learn) how to cook, clean, manage the house and how to have babies(take care of babies)… Fatima did go(went) into her bedroom, and heard her mother closing the dor(door) in the living room.
Sådan, så passer det vidst..
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d. 18-11-2006 kl. 00:32 af Lisa02
Måske mange fejl, men er meget træt, og har skrevet det så godt jeg kunne, håber nogen kan rette den.
Fatima and Saret
Fatima is (a) 16 years old muslim girl, who lives in Australia with her religious familiy.
Her mother Semra is a purse maker for a Greek businessman, where tourists come and buys (buy) some good things as a memery(memory) for being in Australia. Her two younger sisters; Melec, 9 and Nilgun, 12 helps making the puces(purses). Semra does cut (Semra cuts) out the shape of Australia in fake kangaroos(kangarooskin), while her daughters stuck(stick) these onto some plactic (plastic) purces covers (pursecovers) with glue, and Famtima’s job was to fill them up with tissue paper and sew in the zip.
Fatmia’s farther (father)– Atilas – is a man with no humor! Semra really had recpeckt for him,(Semra really respects him, sometimes she is afraid of him) and didn't(doesn't) dare to do something(anything) wrong, that’s why she imedially on seeing her husband(thats why, then he got home from work, she imedially); went to the living room and cleared a seat from(to) him, and imedially(quickly) got Atilas his coffee and slippers.
Today Atila’s sister were coming with his son. Fatima didn’t liked her at all!
Fatima wanted to take out the baby for fresh air (for some fresh air), but most bacause for her selvf(but mostly because of Atila's sister of course)!
She tooked(took) a pram, and went out. On the street she bumped straight into Saret, a Cambodian(Asian) boy, who worked(works) in a laundry. They began to talk, but she was soo scared if someone would see her, with a boy(the asian boy)!! It seemed like they had a really good relationship, and that they liked each other a bit. Fatima’s aunt; Sadeet appeared, she were wearing a traditional Muslim dress, a full head scarf with a long-sleeved ankle-length dress, and holdning his cousin by (in) her left hand. Sadeet and the boy stopped and were watching Fatima and Saret. Fatima said goodbye to Saret and were (and they were)gone in a couple of sekunds. When they came home, the aunt were drinking coffe from gold-rimmecup, and Atila asked: ”So you want to marry the Asian boy now?” and they began to discuss. When Fatima did go for geeting more coffee for the aunt,(when fatima went out in the kitchen to get more coffe to the aunt) as (slet as) her farther(father) did (slet did)told her, they where talking about her to go to Turkey to meet Ali’s son. But Fatima didn’t want to, and was very angry at them. They didn’t knew the way things were in Australia, and sometimes it seemed as though they were living in defferent(different) worlds. But her mother did(slet did)supported her, and she didn’t wanted (want) them to have a life as her self(slet self), she wanted her kids to have a better life that (than) hers. And it ended with Saadet(aunt) saying(said) that she should stop from the school(quit the school), and lean(learn) how to cook, clean, manage the house and how to have babies(take care of babies)… Fatima did go(went) into her bedroom, and heard her mother closing the dor(door) in the living room.
Sådan, så passer det vidst..
Svar #2
18. november 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)
Mange mange gange tak :-)
Har du måske nogle noter liggende ang. emnet, måske?
eller til nogle af de amdre?
Har du måske nogle noter liggende ang. emnet, måske?
eller til nogle af de amdre?
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