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alcohol - rettelse
04. december 2006 af
Findus2y (Slettet)
Hej allesammmen.
Jeg har skrevet en engelsk opgave, og vil gerne have hvis en gad kigge den igennem for nogle fejl. Kunne være dejligt.
Jeg har ikke nogen dansk version, da det bare er noget jeg har fundet på.
På forhånd mange tak. :)
I have always known my wife. We both started in first class, when we were 6 years old. From the day I met her, I couldn’t stop looking at her. She was beautiful, intelligent and she was always nice to me. We were together all the time and we were best friends. In high-school we became more than just friends. I have always loved her, for the person she was and always will be. But 16 years ago she got into mischief. Her mum died by cancer and the doctors wanted to test my wife. To see if she had the hereditary lethal disease like her mother. She flew into a rage and at the same time she was confused and afraid. But I said it was the best for her and our three children. She let herself persuade and she gave them permission to test her. The results upset her. They upset all of us.
At home she wanted a drink. I understood her. She was shocked and needed a sedative which was a drink. The drink became two, and they became three, four, five and so on. At first it didn’t seem to be a problem for her to drink sometimes. But know I see that I should have stopped her earlier.
She used to try to make me feel guilty, and that I was the cause of the growing depressions that she thought was making her drink. We always startede quarreling with each other, and the children were afraid, because they didn’t know why we were yelling.
My wife got sicker and sicker. Not because of the cancer, but because of her drinking. It was terrible. It was terrible for all of us.
But then my best friend told me about A.A. A.A is a place were the alcoholic are togehter with other people, who have drinking-problems. They talk about their abuse with each other and they are very open at the centre.
My wife didn’t seem to like the place to begin with, but later she admitted that it was the best for her, and for the children and me.
She hasn’t drank for a year know, and I am very proud of her. She is my wife and she will be my one and only to death us do apart.
Jeg har skrevet en engelsk opgave, og vil gerne have hvis en gad kigge den igennem for nogle fejl. Kunne være dejligt.
Jeg har ikke nogen dansk version, da det bare er noget jeg har fundet på.
På forhånd mange tak. :)
I have always known my wife. We both started in first class, when we were 6 years old. From the day I met her, I couldn’t stop looking at her. She was beautiful, intelligent and she was always nice to me. We were together all the time and we were best friends. In high-school we became more than just friends. I have always loved her, for the person she was and always will be. But 16 years ago she got into mischief. Her mum died by cancer and the doctors wanted to test my wife. To see if she had the hereditary lethal disease like her mother. She flew into a rage and at the same time she was confused and afraid. But I said it was the best for her and our three children. She let herself persuade and she gave them permission to test her. The results upset her. They upset all of us.
At home she wanted a drink. I understood her. She was shocked and needed a sedative which was a drink. The drink became two, and they became three, four, five and so on. At first it didn’t seem to be a problem for her to drink sometimes. But know I see that I should have stopped her earlier.
She used to try to make me feel guilty, and that I was the cause of the growing depressions that she thought was making her drink. We always startede quarreling with each other, and the children were afraid, because they didn’t know why we were yelling.
My wife got sicker and sicker. Not because of the cancer, but because of her drinking. It was terrible. It was terrible for all of us.
But then my best friend told me about A.A. A.A is a place were the alcoholic are togehter with other people, who have drinking-problems. They talk about their abuse with each other and they are very open at the centre.
My wife didn’t seem to like the place to begin with, but later she admitted that it was the best for her, and for the children and me.
She hasn’t drank for a year know, and I am very proud of her. She is my wife and she will be my one and only to death us do apart.
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