Engelsk
rettelse
26. januar 2007 af
fari (Slettet)
Er der nogen søde der gider læse min opgave i gennem og rette lidt. Jeg skal bare sige at jeg ikke er så god til engelsk,men prøve altså skrive jo lidt men kan ikke sige fejlen og ikke kan selv rette det.
tak
Take the honour out of killing
Summary:
Honour killing are an extreme form of violence against women, in the
article written that many women punishment and killed the form of Honour killing. I 1998 Rukhsana was murdered because she was pregnant and the other girls if they have a relationship with another strenger people. The honour killing is not a problem for muslims, it is a big problem in the world that woomen live in fear, they face death by shooting, burning or killing if they are deemed to have brought shame on the family.
There is many culture and traditional around in the world. People is very diffrences. Same people can dicided themselves,that who like to be
married and what do they want to do in the future but there is also same people that their parents dicided. In the arranged marriage, the parenst
would like chosse their son`s or daughter`s future spouse with no imput from them, if the son`s or daughter refuse the choice, he or she may be
punished. The parents wouldn`t think about the son`s and daughter thatthey want to live together all their life. If the persons don`t know each other so the marriage have no happy endings. Ii is very injustic for
the young people that accept something that they don`t like. They don`t have a choice in their own life, but it is also most the young girl`s that will force to arranged marrige and they feel very unhappy and very of
the young want to run away from home same of them “begå selvmord” .
tak
Take the honour out of killing
Summary:
Honour killing are an extreme form of violence against women, in the
article written that many women punishment and killed the form of Honour killing. I 1998 Rukhsana was murdered because she was pregnant and the other girls if they have a relationship with another strenger people. The honour killing is not a problem for muslims, it is a big problem in the world that woomen live in fear, they face death by shooting, burning or killing if they are deemed to have brought shame on the family.
There is many culture and traditional around in the world. People is very diffrences. Same people can dicided themselves,that who like to be
married and what do they want to do in the future but there is also same people that their parents dicided. In the arranged marriage, the parenst
would like chosse their son`s or daughter`s future spouse with no imput from them, if the son`s or daughter refuse the choice, he or she may be
punished. The parents wouldn`t think about the son`s and daughter thatthey want to live together all their life. If the persons don`t know each other so the marriage have no happy endings. Ii is very injustic for
the young people that accept something that they don`t like. They don`t have a choice in their own life, but it is also most the young girl`s that will force to arranged marrige and they feel very unhappy and very of
the young want to run away from home same of them “begå selvmord” .
Svar #1
26. januar 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Jeg ved ikke om det er utydeligt, men jeg har rettet din tekst. Jeg har lavet mange rettelser, som du kan benytte. Det er selvfølgelig valgfrit.
Hvis du ikke forstår rettelserne eller andet, er du velkommen til at spørge.
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Take the honour out of killing
Honour killing /are/(is) an extreme form of violence against women/,/
(.) /in the/(The) article /written/(is about) that many women (are exposed to) punishment and /killed/(murder) (in) the form of Honour killing.
/I/(In) 1998(,) Rukhsana was murdered because she was pregnant(.) /and the other/(Other) girls (as well) if they have a /relationship/(love affair) with /another strenger people/ (a stranger).
The honour killing is not a problem for /muslims/(Muslims)/,/(;) it is a big problem in the world /that/(where) /woomen/(women) live in fear/,/(.)
/they/(They) face death by shooting, burning or killing if they are deemed to have brought shame on the family.
There /is/(are) many culture(s) and /traditional/(traditions) around /in/ the world. People /is/(are) very /diffrences/(difference).
/Same/(Some) people can /dicided/(deside) themselves, /that/ who (they) /like/(want) to be married (with) and what /do/ they want to do in the future(,) but there /is/(are) also /same/(some) people /that their/(there their) parents /dicided/(deside).
In /the/ arranged marriage(s), the /parenst/(parents) /would like/ (want) /chosse/(to choose) their /son’s/(son) or daughter’s future spouse with no /imput/(input) from /them/(the children)/,/(.)
/if/(If) the /son`s/(son) or daughter refuse(s) /the/(their) choice, he or she (will) may be punished.
The parents /wouldn`t/(would not) think about the son`s and daughters thatthey want to live together all their life. (Hvad mener du?)
If the persons /don`t/(do not) know each other(, then) /so/ the marriage /have/(has) no happy /endings/(ending).
/Ii/(It) is very /injustic/(injustice) for the young people /that/(to) accept something /that/ they /don`t/(do not) like.
They /don`t/(do not) have a choice in their own life, but it is also most the young /girl`s/(girls) that will (be) force(d) to arranged (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they (will) feel very unhappy and /very/(lots) of the young want to run away from (their) home(.) /same/(Some) of them (commit suicide)
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/.../ = slettes
(...) = tilføjes
Hvis du ikke forstår rettelserne eller andet, er du velkommen til at spørge.
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Take the honour out of killing
Honour killing /are/(is) an extreme form of violence against women/,/
(.) /in the/(The) article /written/(is about) that many women (are exposed to) punishment and /killed/(murder) (in) the form of Honour killing.
/I/(In) 1998(,) Rukhsana was murdered because she was pregnant(.) /and the other/(Other) girls (as well) if they have a /relationship/(love affair) with /another strenger people/ (a stranger).
The honour killing is not a problem for /muslims/(Muslims)/,/(;) it is a big problem in the world /that/(where) /woomen/(women) live in fear/,/(.)
/they/(They) face death by shooting, burning or killing if they are deemed to have brought shame on the family.
There /is/(are) many culture(s) and /traditional/(traditions) around /in/ the world. People /is/(are) very /diffrences/(difference).
/Same/(Some) people can /dicided/(deside) themselves, /that/ who (they) /like/(want) to be married (with) and what /do/ they want to do in the future(,) but there /is/(are) also /same/(some) people /that their/(there their) parents /dicided/(deside).
In /the/ arranged marriage(s), the /parenst/(parents) /would like/ (want) /chosse/(to choose) their /son’s/(son) or daughter’s future spouse with no /imput/(input) from /them/(the children)/,/(.)
/if/(If) the /son`s/(son) or daughter refuse(s) /the/(their) choice, he or she (will) may be punished.
The parents /wouldn`t/(would not) think about the son`s and daughters thatthey want to live together all their life. (Hvad mener du?)
If the persons /don`t/(do not) know each other(, then) /so/ the marriage /have/(has) no happy /endings/(ending).
/Ii/(It) is very /injustic/(injustice) for the young people /that/(to) accept something /that/ they /don`t/(do not) like.
They /don`t/(do not) have a choice in their own life, but it is also most the young /girl`s/(girls) that will (be) force(d) to arranged (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they (will) feel very unhappy and /very/(lots) of the young want to run away from (their) home(.) /same/(Some) of them (commit suicide)
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/.../ = slettes
(...) = tilføjes
Svar #2
26. januar 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
but there /is/(are) also /same/(some) people /that their/(there their) parents /dicided/(deside).
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but there /is/(are) also /same/(some) people /that their/(where their) parents /dicided/(deside).
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but it is also most the young /girl`s/(girls)
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but it is /also most/(mostly) the young /girl`s/(girls)
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that will (be) force(d) to arranged (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they
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that will (be) force(d) to arrange/d/ (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they
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but there /is/(are) also /same/(some) people /that their/(where their) parents /dicided/(deside).
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but it is also most the young /girl`s/(girls)
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but it is /also most/(mostly) the young /girl`s/(girls)
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that will (be) force(d) to arranged (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they
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that will (be) force(d) to arrange/d/ (a) /marrige/(marriage) and they
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