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Rettelse
18. februar 2007 af
joo34 (Slettet)
er der nogen,der kan læse en kort essay i gennem og rette den gramatisk.
I Vil meget gerne give nogen forslag om "a good relatinship bteewen parents and the teenage children."
tak på forhånd
Relationship is a very important between the parents and the young children. I think it is most the parents that ask themselves….am I a good parent? Do I make the things right for my children? However, but we are not sure we make the things right for the tennage children, the parents hop and do what they mean is the best for the teenage children. All parents love their children and have a responsibility, and if they want to make a good and strong relationship with the children, they must to listen and understand their children. The parents shall put attention to their children, and put their time with their children.The one thing it is very important for the young that the parents recpect their choices and can help the child on the way to be a independent person. The young need that the parents support them when they have some problems in their life.
I Vil meget gerne give nogen forslag om "a good relatinship bteewen parents and the teenage children."
tak på forhånd
Relationship is a very important between the parents and the young children. I think it is most the parents that ask themselves….am I a good parent? Do I make the things right for my children? However, but we are not sure we make the things right for the tennage children, the parents hop and do what they mean is the best for the teenage children. All parents love their children and have a responsibility, and if they want to make a good and strong relationship with the children, they must to listen and understand their children. The parents shall put attention to their children, and put their time with their children.The one thing it is very important for the young that the parents recpect their choices and can help the child on the way to be a independent person. The young need that the parents support them when they have some problems in their life.
Svar #1
18. februar 2007 af Geekgirl (Slettet)
(Her har jeg rettet nogle af dine fejl):
A relationship between parents and their young children is very important. I think it's mostly the parents that ask themselves "Am I a good parent? Do I make things right for my children?" Even if we are not sure if we make things right for the children, the parents do what they think is best for their children. All parents love their children and they have a responsibility. If they want to make a good and strong relationship with their children, they must listen and understand their children. The parents should put attention to their children, and spend their time with them. One thing that is very important for the young ones is that the parents respect their choices and that they can help them on the way to become an independent person. The child need their parents support when they have problems in their life.
A relationship between parents and their young children is very important. I think it's mostly the parents that ask themselves "Am I a good parent? Do I make things right for my children?" Even if we are not sure if we make things right for the children, the parents do what they think is best for their children. All parents love their children and they have a responsibility. If they want to make a good and strong relationship with their children, they must listen and understand their children. The parents should put attention to their children, and spend their time with them. One thing that is very important for the young ones is that the parents respect their choices and that they can help them on the way to become an independent person. The child need their parents support when they have problems in their life.
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