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rettelse af engelsk(hatser meget
19. februar 2007 af
thelife (Slettet)
hey
nu har jeg enlig skrevet resumet af filmen “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” og skrevet vurdering også og lidt små ider om american dream men tror ikke at det er rigtig håber i vil give mig ider om american dream til filmen når i har læst min resume
og om i vil se på min rettelse og grammatik fejl eller hvis jeg mangler noget må i meget gerne put i
The movie “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” which is from 1993 and made by Lasse Hallstrøm.
The movie “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” it takes place in a small town Nowhereville, USA is about the busy Gilbert Grape who is always caring for his handicapped little brother Arnie and their mother Bonnie is so fat that she can not take care for her children. He has taking the father role and the responsibility for his family. Gilberts two Sister Amy and Ellen also help him with their fat mother and the handicapped Arnie. They are preparing Arnie's 18 years birthday and he is very exalting for his party. Arnie always keeps climbing a water tower and on a tree which Gilbert always help him down and explain him that it is danger to do it but the next day he do it again. Gilbert has an affair with a married lady until he meets a lovely girl in his town Becky. For first time since their father suicide and dead their mother climbs the stairs in to her bedroom it was the day when Arnie's 18 years birthday.
This film is a good film because we can learn something from it like the family is helping it eacher and Gilbert is not alone to take care for his family because his two sisters helping him. It is good that they are not given up because it is a very hard life to live in that way if it was me I will give up for a long time ago. Beside that it is a funny movie and I can feel it that Gilbert has a hard life but still he will never give up because he loves his family especially his little brother even he his a difficult boy to take care of him.
Hjælp :
Definition: the American dream
i think
When they got a burger reasurant and eat ice cream and the mother is fat and the fater suicide because the are a lot of peoole who is fat and suicide
håber får svar
nu har jeg enlig skrevet resumet af filmen “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” og skrevet vurdering også og lidt små ider om american dream men tror ikke at det er rigtig håber i vil give mig ider om american dream til filmen når i har læst min resume
og om i vil se på min rettelse og grammatik fejl eller hvis jeg mangler noget må i meget gerne put i
The movie “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” which is from 1993 and made by Lasse Hallstrøm.
The movie “What's Eating Gilbert Grape” it takes place in a small town Nowhereville, USA is about the busy Gilbert Grape who is always caring for his handicapped little brother Arnie and their mother Bonnie is so fat that she can not take care for her children. He has taking the father role and the responsibility for his family. Gilberts two Sister Amy and Ellen also help him with their fat mother and the handicapped Arnie. They are preparing Arnie's 18 years birthday and he is very exalting for his party. Arnie always keeps climbing a water tower and on a tree which Gilbert always help him down and explain him that it is danger to do it but the next day he do it again. Gilbert has an affair with a married lady until he meets a lovely girl in his town Becky. For first time since their father suicide and dead their mother climbs the stairs in to her bedroom it was the day when Arnie's 18 years birthday.
This film is a good film because we can learn something from it like the family is helping it eacher and Gilbert is not alone to take care for his family because his two sisters helping him. It is good that they are not given up because it is a very hard life to live in that way if it was me I will give up for a long time ago. Beside that it is a funny movie and I can feel it that Gilbert has a hard life but still he will never give up because he loves his family especially his little brother even he his a difficult boy to take care of him.
Hjælp :
Definition: the American dream
i think
When they got a burger reasurant and eat ice cream and the mother is fat and the fater suicide because the are a lot of peoole who is fat and suicide
håber får svar
Svar #1
22. februar 2007 af thelife (Slettet)
er der nogen der vil rette min gramatik fejl for jeg skal aflever den snart tak på forhånd
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